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发表于 2012-10-5 19:31:48 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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题目:do you agree or disagree? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
As the technology and science developing,more and more high-tech products for entertainment come into children's life,which a large amount of children have own computers. We have to admit thatthrough computer children can learn the world and get information moreconvenient, however, addicted to computer game becomes a problem which bothersparents. Should parents allow children to play computer game? Personally speaking,the answer is no.
To begin with, children are too young to controlthemselves when they play computer games. Some computer games need a long timeto improve equipments, to finish missions and to get grades. These things willattract children, and most of them don't have mature mind to control themselvesnot to play for too long time. As a result, children can't quit the game and beaddicted to it. According to the research from Jimei University, 56% ofchildren who play computer games cannot control themselves when they areplaying games. 21% of these children are lack of communication with others, and47% of them have poor eyesight. Through these results we can see withoutcontrol, these children are poor in both social life and health, so I thinkchildren should not be allowed to play computer games.
Another equally important reason is thatthere are many things children can do for fun instead of playing computergames, and actually, most of them are better to children than computer games. Readingbooks is a good way to relax. If children read some books they like, they willrelax and learn something at the same time. In addition, outside activities arealso beneficial to children. They can not only keep healthy, but also learnsome communication skills, such as how to get along with others well, how tofocus on the things they have in common and tolerate the differences, hotmediate in others’ perspectives. A good case in this point is that myneighbor’s boy used to stay at home and play computer games, so he was shy,thin and weak. Then his mother encouraged him to join in a basketball team.After half a year, the boy became outgoing, sunny and strong. In a word, thereare numbers of activities that benefit children, rather than computer games.
To some extent, sometimes children can playcomputer games to relax themselves. Nevertheless, I think there are otheroutside activities they can do both for fun and good health.
In a nutshell, I reinforce my standpointthat children shouldn't be allowed to play computer games, as they are easilyout of control, and there are a lot of activities more valuable. Adult has responsibilityto guide children to use computer and make them know computer is not just forfun.

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 楼主| 发表于 2012-10-6 22:57:27 | 只看该作者
为什么没有人理我 好难过 55555
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发表于 2012-10-11 20:25:35 | 只看该作者
为什么没有人理我 好难过 55555
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