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Get education easier 的作文题
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希望大家多批评哈
感觉我词汇都太低级，单词也都背了，怎么就不会用orz
还有哪些语法明显错误呢？
谢谢大家抽出时间来看一下
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结构是
科技的进步＋人们态度的变化（家长＋学生＋政府措施）
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No matter how hot and controversial the education issue is, as for me, it is no doubt that the access to education is much easier in nowadays. Here is my passage emphasizing in two main aspects.
The media plays an important role in the change of difficulty of getting education. For example, when I was in grade 6 in primary school, resulting from the outbreak of SARS, we had to stay at home. However, with the distance education, we could get union courses just in front of the TV. Not to mention the great value of Internet. Though it, we can find education information more independently, more quickly and in more varieties，when compared to traditional measure. No matter you want to communicate with others or get online videos, what you need to do is just to click.
Only the development of the technique can not explain this phenomenon that education can be easily got, we should also observe the change of attitude towards education
We now all agree with that “what sculpture is to a block of marble, education is to the soul. “With the increasing attention to the education, more and more things we have implemented. For the people, especially in the village, who used to want their children work with them instead of studying in the school, have realized the relationship between one’s education level and one’s future. They are more likely to send their children to school today. Admittedly, because of the fixed resource and increasing population, children are under much more pressure for competition. They study more actively than before, which also leads to a better education. To meet theses requirement, many high school and universities have increased the recruit students number, meanwhile, many clam school has also established. More importantly, the government has implemented many measures to assure the education right of children. As in China, the primary and junior high school is free for all the children. Students in poverty can often get discount or soft loan. The illiteracy rate in China has decreased from 6.72% to 4.08% in last 10 years, which is obviously a great success. Such result can be seen around the whole world, from which we can conclude that this kind of measure is effective and education is certainly much easier to be got.
In a word, thanks to the development of technology and attitude associated with education, people around the world through all the ages can get education more lightly. |
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发表于 2012-10-25 20:02:01
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