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发表于 2004-10-26 03:30:00 | 只看该作者

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You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.


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If I could visit any foreign country, I’d like to visit Ireland. The scenery there is so beautiful. Ireland has a lot of rain and that makes everything very green and lush. It has not become a completely industrialized country yet, so there are still areas where the countryside is unspoiled by pollution. Often, you can drive for miles without seeing another car or coming to a big city. I’d like to take my set of paints and several canvases and try to capture some of the scenes there. It seems that every way you turn, you are looking at beautiful scenery. The area near the ocean is especially dramatic, with giant dark cliffs out of the water.



I also think I’d enjoy the slower pace of Ireland. It is so different from the busy pace of my country. Of course, Ireland’s big cities are just as hectic as any big city anywhere. But many of the Irish live in smaller towns or on farms in rural areas. Visiting these places is very restful. People do not feel the need to stick to a schedule. Things get done, but in a much more relaxed fashion. In my country, there’s the feeling that you are always late for something. In Ireland, it feels like you are never late because no one stays on schedule.



Most of all, it would be interesting for me to meet the cousins in my mother’s family. They live in Donegal. I could see the house where my grandmother grew up and where my cousins still live. This house is connected to a lighthouse. Visiting there would give me a clearer idea of what my grandmother’s childhood was like.



Ireland would be a refreshing break from the life I lead in my own country. I wish I could go there.




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发表于 2004-11-1 22:20:00 | 只看该作者

总体而言,这是一篇好文章, 论述得比较充分, 使读者对所描述的国家有一个大致的了解.

一点启示是: 对于我们大多数中国人而言,很难真正对中国以外的某个国家有较到位的认识. 但这不妨碍我们写这类题目, 关键是结合一些常用的理由去"编造"一些细节,如历史悠久,环境好,国民友善等

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