Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.
A. they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease
B. after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again
C. in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again
D. with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine, they began growing again
E. a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again
正确答案是A，可是看一下BCD对于红字部分的解释： B: Particularly red wine cannot describe consumption- the preposition of is needed C: particularly of red wine is not parallel to moderate alcohol consumption; it needs to follow moderate consumption of alcohol to make sense. D: Without the preposition of, the sentence indicates that red wine is a kind of consumption- which makes no sense.
我的疑问是： 对于C，解释说要变成， moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine，这种平行结构来表示总体和局部的关系，ok，收下该解释。 可是对于B和D，即是加上of结构，原句中也没有一个相似的结构来对称啊。莫非是因为没有and，使得particularly of red wine就是简单插入语，就不用管那么多了？
particularly of red wine可以作为插入语，但是在B中做的是report的同位修饰，所以不对称，另外插入语的前提是不会造成夹心的情况下才可使用，比如这样的结构：主语,插入语,谓语+宾语。 很明显的可以判别D也是同类错误，linked in report ... , in particularly red wine,这样看很明显了吧？
particularly of red wine可以作为插入语，但是在B中做的是report的同位修饰，所以不对称，另外插入语的前提是不会造成夹心的情况下才可使用，比如这样的结构：主语,插入语,谓语+宾语。 很明显的可以判别D也是同类错误，linked in report ... , in particularly red wine,这样看很明显了吧？
particularly of red wine可以作为插入语，但是在B中做的是report的同位修饰，所以不对称，另外插入语的前提是不会造成夹心的情况下才可使用，比如这样的结构：主语,插入语,谓语+宾语。 很明显的可以判别D也是同类错误，linked in report ... , in particularly red wine,这样看很明显了吧？
particularly of red wine可以作为插入语，但是在B中做的是report的同位修饰，所以不对称，另外插入语的前提是不会造成夹心的情况下才可使用，比如这样的结构：主语,插入语,谓语+宾语。 很明显的可以判别D也是同类错误，linked in report ... , in particularly red wine,这样看很明显了吧？
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