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幸运E枪兵 · 发表于 2012-3-12 12:26:02

The thirteen originalBritish colonies in North America, some formed as commercial ventures,others as religious havens, each had a written charter that set forth itsform of government and the rights of the colonists.
A. some formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, each hada written charter
B. some being formed as a commercial venture, others as religious havens,all of which had written charters
C. some that formed as commercial ventures, others as religious havens, allhad written charters
D. with some being formedas a commercial venture, others as religious havens, all had a writtencharter (A)
E. with some formed as commercial ventures, while others as religioushavens, each had a written charter

A. Correct；some formed ascommercial ventures, others as religious havens做为the thirteen originalBritish colonies in North America的同位语，each为the thirteen originalBritish colonies的同位语B. Being多余；all与后面的its 单复形式不统一；全句缺少谓语动词
C. some that formed结构中some在定语从句中做主语，主动行使form动作错误；all与后面的its 单复形式不统一
D. with的存在使得some并不是指代colonies，而是与colonies相关的东西；all与后面的its单复形式不统一；这里with并没有夹心修饰的歧义，因为all/each和colonies是同一样东西，所以向前向后修饰逻辑上都一样（夹心修饰见prep 1-207补充说明）。
E. with的存在使得some不是指代colonies，而是与colonies相关的东西；while多余，因为后面的others as religioushavens中没有谓语动词，while必须省(如果有谓语动词则不能省，如Some cleaned the windows,while others mopped the floor
请问d和e中为什么有了with，some指代的就不是colonies了?

wangxinlin · 发表于 2012-4-30 21:52:54

dddddd同问

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