The World Wildlife Fund has declared that global warming, a phenomenon most scientists agree to be caused by human beings in burning fossil fuels, will create havoc among migratory birds by altering the environment in ways harmful to their habitats.
(A) a phenomenon most scientists agree to be caused by human beings in burning fossil fuels, (B) a phenomenon most scientists agree that is caused by fossil fuels burned by human beings, (C) a phenomenon that most scientists agree is caused by human beings’ burning of fossil fuels, 正确答案 (D) which most scientists agree on as a phenomenon caused by human beings who burn fossil fuels, (E) which most scientists agree to be a phenomenon caused by fossil fuels burned by human beings,
Logical predication; Rhetorical construction
Th e underlined portion of the sentence is an appositive defi ning global warming as a phenomenon caused by the burning of fossil fuels by humans. Because this appositive intervenes between the subject (global warming) and verb (will create) of a clause, it should be expressed as clearly and economically as possible so as not to confuse the meaning of the sentence as a whole.
A To be caused and in burning are wordy, awkward, and indirect. B Th at is should immediately follow phenomenon, not agree. C Correct. Th e phrase human beings’ burning is more economical than constructions with prepositional phrases or relative clauses. D Th e phrasing is wordy and indirect. E Th e phrasing is wordy and the meaning is imprecise; it is not fossil fuels that cause global warming—it is the burning of fossil fuels by humans.
Th e correct answer is C. 在C选项中是一个定语从句 a phenomenen是做的定语从句中is的主语吗?那most scientists agree是做的什么成分? |