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发表于 2012-2-28 10:32:33 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support


 Now people in significant number are getting to realize that sports and social activities are also playing a considerably important roles as classes and libraries are at universities and colleges.Without sports and social activities students will not have a plentiful campus life.So I strongly argue  that schools should provide them  financil support equall to classes and libraries.
   Since the number of graduates has almost doubled compared with that of ten years ago,it is really difiicult that for a graduate who without work experience to find a ideal job. So when students are still at school the more social activities they participate in the more experience they will accumulate which will benifit their careers.For instance,i have a classmate who has abundant experience of social activities,he has easily got several offers from diverse companies when others were still taking part in some interviews.In adition,students can also improve their abillity of communiction.Unversity is a transitional stage for students to enter soceity,so attend college is not only to accept education but also to enhance abillities which will accompany with you for your whole life.And i believe the comunication is the most useful skill of them.For example When a student is graduated from scholl he need to take some interviews,if the stundent can show his talent in communication that will give the interviewer a good impression.
   Besides,i hold the idea that sports are as significant as social activities,classes and libraries,which is an essential element for keeping a good health.Students can not study well with a weak body.Obama the well-known president of United States who love basketball pretty much.As a president,Obama is always extraodinary busy,however, he still take time to play bascketball, he even played some games with NBA stars.Therfore take rational exercise is necessary.The other reason that sports are so important is that  with long time of studying and without a break will definitely lead to tiredness which not only will distract one's mind from studying but is also harmful to one's health.At that time students should choose to do some sports to  relax.Only through this can students have a better state to learn.
   Finally, by comparing with libraries and classes,students will also benefit notably from sports and social activities.Such as social experience,comunication skill,good health and spirits.
   Obviously all of the analysis support a remarkable conclusion that sports and social activities are so important which deserve to receive equal finacial support as classes and libraries.
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