prep08语法题 with结构修饰

小目标750 · 发表于 2019-1-16 17:05:53

The loan companyannounced it would soon lend money to borrowers with proven records of theirnot paying back their loans on time, collectively known as the subprimelending market.
A. of their not paying back their loans on time,
B. of not paying back their loans on time, a group
C. of not paying back their loans on time, with such a group
D. that they do not pay back their loans on time,
E.    that they do not payback their loans on time, such a group

OA：B

有两个不懂的地方：1. 选项C中“ with结构”修饰哪个部分呢？对于with结构修饰的用法搞不太清
2.  Ron 指出：[size=14.007002830505371px](d) and (e) are unidiomatic; you can't write "proven records that they..."[size=14.007002830505371px]
想请问下proven records that..为什么不对？
希望大神们能来指点一下！感谢！

蟹黄味蚕豆 · 发表于 2019-1-27 02:25:02

问题1
c选项如果忽略掉错误和其用法的奇怪个人认为是做伴随状语大概类似于
the teacher came in the class with a book in his hand
对主句主语发出动作的状态进行补充说明也可以认为是修饰前面的一整句话就对前面一整句话的信息进行补充说明但是一般都没有逗号

蟹黄味蚕豆 · 发表于 2019-1-27 02:31:59

问题2 个人认为如下：
that 在这里有两种可能一种是用作定语从句解另外一种是做record的同位语从句解
在第一种情况中 that是关系代词在整个定语从句中充当主语或宾语的成分但是你看这个无论是做主语还是作宾语都不是
那么作为同位语解可能更为合适
但是 n that ... 这个名词通常是一个抽象名词比如 discovery 、theory、 phenomenon等用来做record的同位语比较奇怪另外呢就算是把record作为一个抽象名词来理解后面的句子应该是展开说明这个抽象名词是什么没有按时还款是一种record 记录还是听奇怪的
你可能觉得诶不奇怪啊
但是你对比一下phenomenon
a phenomenon that the water turns dark suddenly when...
当xx情况发生时候水的颜色突然变深了这是一种现象（例子举得有点随意，能理解就好）

a record that they did not pay their loan on time
他们没有按时还款是一种记录

不知道你能明白我表达的意思嘛

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