求教：两道GWD老题（有关平行结构），搜了题库实在找不到，也许不是真题。。。

shangchangle · 发表于 2012-1-23 18:20:20

因为做的不是套题，所以没有题的具体出处，不好意思啦>_<
1.In recent years cattle breeders have increasingly used crossbreeding, in part that their steers should acquire certain characteristics and partly because crossbreeding is said to provide hybrid vigor.
纠结的选项
(D)partly because certain characteristics should be acquired by their steers
(E)partly to acquire certain characteristics in their steers
答案是E，解释是D后面的被动逻使用有误，但我觉得C的结构与后面内容更平行些，求分析

2.Temporary-employment agencies benefit not only from the increasing demand for clerical workers but also the higher profits made when highly paid professionals are placed, requests for whom have increased in the recent wave of corporate takeovers.
纠结的选项
(C)from the requests for highly paid professionals, who make higher profits for the agencies when placed and whose requests
(E)from the higher profits made in placing highly paid professionals, requests for whom
答案选E，解释是C项句尾的request逻辑错误。。但我觉得C比E的平行结构更工整，而且request使用无错，虽说罗嗦了点，不知道C有没有什么硬伤？求分析

不好意思，第一次上CD发帖问问题。。。。有格式错误，还望海涵~

shangchangle · 发表于 2012-1-23 21:58:36

额。。。。不需要NN回复。。。。大家随便给我点线索也成~

shangchangle · 发表于 2012-1-24 21:52:53

自己顶一下！！求指导啊~~~啊啊啊~~~

shangchangle · 发表于 2012-1-24 23:01:57

额。。。自己明白了。。。不好意思= =
1、意思优先，结构次之，partly也不是严格要求平行的，C项被动实在太糙了
2、按句义，increasing demand应该和higher profit相对逻辑更合理，而不是request

求教：两道GWD老题（有关平行结构），搜了题库实在找不到，也许不是真题。。。

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