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mashengyi · 发表于 2011-5-21 22:01:58

题目:should school student be limited on hours of watching TV program or movies?

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I agree with the school student should be limited on hours of watching TV program and movie. There existed a widespread misunderstand that limit on hours of watching would reduce children’s happiness, nonetheless detailed analysis had let me to think it is beneficial for children better future. Evidently no one can ignore how important children’s career will be, it is high time for everyone made some measure to insure this disadvantages not go to happen. Here are some of my opinions about the big part of limit hours in children studying.

First of all school student being limited on hours of watching will spend more time on their study and think new things deeply from class. Actually the new thing we can’t remember stably is we haven’t gotten the real meaning of it. For everyday far from watching TV programs, children could cost much time on thinking, this will be impressive and help remember. Simultaneously limit hours on watching TV program is a severely rule, children can used to been an everyday thing so when they put energy on book there won’t be any distracting among them.

On the other hand some people will claim that children also need time to relax they are not machine and also can feel exhaust, limit hours on watching TV program seems to crude for the children. But from my perspective, I think children at their young age couldn’t be so free, they need some norm to restrict their habits and behavior. For instance, my nephew always wants to visit his grandparents, and every time when he got there he would have more toys and free time. This is because this is no norm in his grandparents’ house, they like him very much from other side in fact they are spoiling him. So what I’m going to say is relax needing is appropriate instead of freedom. Apparently no parents can scorn the key fact that the bad influence about no norm and no limit hours on watching

To be short conclusion, motivated by my consideration, I argue that school student should limit on watching TV program and movies. Generally it will finally word widely in their future.

wispzhen · 发表于 2011-5-22 23:24:30

LZ写的非常棒啊，学习

mashengyi · 发表于 2011-5-23 17:29:24

谢谢了 ···· 大家都互相学习哈

mashengyi · 发表于 2011-5-23 17:30:23

下面的是按照托福的写风来的

It is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life, agree or disagree?

On no account can we overlook the fact watching movies can teach us something about real life, but there are many other factors that are worth watching movies. People may look for relax, happiness, cozy and realism when join into the theater. Enjoying movies with pop corn is one of the most excited things that everyone used to doing on weekend. Putting them together to elucidate the reasons for watching movies however can be very subjective and eloquent.
Sometimes we would ask ourselves “what do I consider to be reasons in watching so many movies?” because many people always choice watching movies to spend time in weekend. From the states that everyone’s opinion about this can be different. But the most one they remind is watching movies that can teach us something about real life. Except this one we got a variety answers maybe it’s more concise from another side it would be more crucial.
From many experience of mine, I would say that first of all, the reason for my cost on movies is the pop corn. Although some people say I squander money on something didn’t worth it, I still pay for it every week. When your first step put into the theater, the smell of the fragrant pop corn directly go through your nose, stimulate your brain to secrete impulsion. Further more, if I have enough money I will buy one ticket and enjoy the movie with my pop corn. You can not image that feeling without trying. With the stereo chorus and big screen you could put your self into the photo in addition you also have much delicious pop corn in your hand. Only the paradise can win these.
On the other way, I agree with the movies can teach us something about real life, it could influence our attitude to life and direct us. Among these possible factors, pop corn maybe the first one for me, so I think people should have some very extraordinary reasons which I think based on individual environment.

mashengyi · 发表于 2011-5-23 17:30:40

Do you agree with the following statement? In a team, those who do not accept others’ criticism can not succeed.

There is a certain consideration that no one could succeed without accepting others’ criticism in a team. I’m sure everyone at this age have experienced team work and it’s not special any more how to achieve goal, how to accomplish task and how to work with others. According join in a group people would learn and improve some drawback they’ll realize about themselves before. Apparently team work is kind of practical work.
When someone ask you some question after your group finish the task, they would like to say “how do you feel about your relation between group members” or “what is your benefit in your whole work.” These questions all depend on the process in work such as the cooperation relation and suggestion. From stating that judgment factors about team work, for my perspective, be honest, in a team, those who do not accept others; criticism can not succeed.
In any experience of mine, I would wish that first of all, team members in our group could accept others’ criticism. Even though he/she think it is totally contradictory with his/her original ideas, it’s necessary for him to listen to others’ criticism. Brain storm is a method for me used usually in my team, everyone could come up with their ideas even something sounds very weird, but it’s our creativity and intellectual, these things is precise for me. Later on if somebody do not accept others’ and stand his/her own way, that’d be unpleasant, our train of thinking would be interrupted. As our task would be accomplished perfectly, the idea is one of our core step, in that case accepting others’ criticism and improving will influence our final sore directly. Evidently on no account can we overlook the importance of accepting others’ criticism, it is high time let every one in the group to know accepting is not abashed it’s a better opportunity to learn form others’.
Further more team work can not be finish by one people, it needs to cooperate with each other in group. So accepting others’ criticism should be highlighted, without this factor out team would not succeed.

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