1.Charlotte Perkins Gilman, a late nineteenth-century feminist, called for urban apartment houses including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities.
(A) including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities
(B) that included child-care facilities, and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities
(C) with child-care facilities included and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities
(D) that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities（D）
(E) to include child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities included
看了解释看不懂A到底怎么错，求指导~
-- by 会员 frankzhiwei (2010/12/3 17:24:03)
A 错在第二个and前省了介词for，平行结构介词尽量不省。 | 
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