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请教大全这题A到底怎么错?

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发表于 2010-12-3 17:24:03 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
1.Charlotte Perkins Gilman, a late nineteenth-century feminist, called for urban apartment houses including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities.

(A) including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities

(B) that included child-care facilities, and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities

(C) with child-care facilities included and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities

(D) that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilitiesD

(E) to include child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities included

看了解释看不懂A到底怎么错,求指导~
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 楼主| 发表于 2010-12-3 18:19:16 | 只看该作者
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发表于 2010-12-3 18:58:02 | 只看该作者
1.Charlotte Perkins Gilman, a late nineteenth-century feminist, called for urban apartment houses including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities.

(A) including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities

(B) that included child-care facilities, and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities

(C) with child-care facilities included and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities

(D) that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilitiesD

(E) to include child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities included

看了解释看不懂A到底怎么错,求指导~
-- by 会员 frankzhiwei (2010/12/3 17:24:03)



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