OG12语法 sc79求助（已解决,谢谢各位）

Analee · 发表于 2010-8-23 14:42:47

搞不清楚a part of 和part of的区别。求助的说

The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for$950 million,which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.

(A) milion,which is part of a deal that will make
(B) million,a part of a deal that makes
(C) million,a part of a deal making
(D) million as a part of a deal to make
(E) million as part of a deal that will make

答案是e

og解释说D选项：as a part of a deal to make suggests that the deal itself includes making the company the largest manufacturer rather than its being the outcome of the deal.
我看不懂。额，求助。。

Analee · 发表于 2010-8-23 14:55:46

神啊，来只高手来解救我吧哦叶。。我纠结这个已经半个小时了。。

Analee · 发表于 2010-8-23 15:01:45

喵喵的。看来这道题很难。大家都被难到了。

Analee · 发表于 2010-8-23 16:42:46

http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/the-computer-company-has-announced-that-it-will-purchase-the-t2673.html

if you use the infinitive "to make", then the computer company is still the subject of the sentence. therefore, in this case you have to use the reflexive pronoun: itself. as an analogy, i can't look at me in the mirror, but i can look atmyself in the mirror. same deal.

in choice (e), "...that will make..." shifts the role of subject to deal, so a reflexive pronoun is no longer needed. in fact, the reflexive pronoun would be absurd in this case, since a deal obviously can't make itself the largest manufacturer in the market.

我选的D，这个答案从另外一个语法点分析D为什么错了，但是还是无法解释part of 和a part of 的区别

Areak · 发表于 2010-8-23 16:55:21

我觉得你可以这么理解,不定式to do表示一种目的性的动作,而deal是一个抽象而非人的概念,不可以行使to do的动作. 至于part of 和a part of倒不是很关键,a part of修饰可数名词, part of的话就通吃了, 相比之下,在原文的context中, a part of更合适。愚见当作抛砖引玉了你说OG对D选项的解释，也是这个意思：deal之后接to do使得to do的概念由deal来发出，不合适。记住一点，主动动作谓语，一般只能修饰人

Analee · 发表于 2010-8-23 17:01:41

哦，明白了~谢谢areak君~

wangxiwei · 发表于 2010-8-23 18:01:06

(A) which指代million错误。
(B) part of 表示是同位语，但 deal 与 million 不是同类，million 是个数字 number，它的同位语可以是
a number…。deal 是 business agreement，用它作同位语的可以是 agreement, contract 等；makes
一般现在时态错误，应该用将来时，表示将来的预期。
(C) part of 表示同位语，但 deal 与 million 不是同类，理由与选项 B 相同；分词的形式不能表达出从
句才具有的时态概念。
(D) to make 的修饰对象有歧义，原句是修饰 deal 的，但不定式的逻辑主语又可以是句子主语。
(E) 介词 as 引导的短语在句中充当状语，如同 The news comes as a shock. You need to be able to
work as part of a team.中的 as 一样。这里 as part of…不是同位语，不需要去指代前面哪一个词或者
动作。

希望能够帮助到你呵呵

wangxiwei · 发表于 2010-8-23 18:03:10

D 的歧异在于 to do一般优先表示主语的动作的目的在本题里面就是 purchase ... to do....
而在本题里是表示这个 deal to do ...
所以就可能造成歧义错误

Analee · 发表于 2010-8-23 18:45:55

努力看懂中~咩~
谢谢楼上的大大了~

BreezyCipher · 发表于 2010-8-23 20:57:19

其实D选项的to make改变原意了。原句是will make 表结果，而D选项的to make是表目的。

OG12语法 sc79求助（已解决,谢谢各位）

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