OG12语法 sc79求助（已解决,谢谢各位）

Analee

搞不清楚a part of 和part of的区别。求助的说

The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for$950 million,which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.




(A)  milion,which is part of a deal that will make
(B)  million,a part of a deal that makes
(C)  million,a part of a deal making
(D)  million as a part of a deal to make
(E)  million as part of a deal that will make


答案是e


og解释说D选项：as a part of a deal to make suggests that the deal itself  includes making the company the largest manufacturer  rather than its being the outcome of the deal.
我看不懂。额，求助。。

Analee

神啊，来只高手来解救我吧哦叶。。我纠结这个已经半个小时了。。

Analee

喵喵的。看来这道题很难。大家都被难到了。

Analee

http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/the-computer-company-has-announced-that-it-will-purchase-the-t2673.html

if you use the infinitive "to make", then the computer company is still the subject of the sentence. therefore, in this case you have to use the reflexive pronoun: itself. as an analogy, i can't look at me in the mirror, but i can look atmyself in the mirror. same deal.

in choice (e), "...that will make..." shifts the role of subject to deal, so a reflexive pronoun is no longer needed. in fact, the reflexive pronoun would be absurd in this case, since a deal obviously can't make itself the largest manufacturer in the market.

我选的D，这个答案从另外一个语法点分析D为什么错了，但是还是无法解释part of 和a part of 的区别

Areak

我觉得你可以这么理解,不定式to do表示一种目的性的动作,而deal是一个抽象而非人的概念,不可以行使to do的动作. 至于part of 和a part of倒不是很关键,a part of修饰可数名词, part of的话就通吃了, 相比之下,在原文的context中, a part of更合适。愚见当作抛砖引玉了你说OG对D选项的解释，也是这个意思：deal之后接to do使得to do的概念由deal来发出，不合适。记住一点，主动动作谓语，一般只能修饰人

Analee

哦，明白了~谢谢areak君~

wangxiwei

(A) which指代million错误。
(B) part of 表示是同位语，但 deal 与 million 不是同类，million 是个数字 number，它的同位语可以是
a number…。deal 是 business agreement，用它作同位语的可以是 agreement, contract 等；makes
一般现在时态错误，应该用将来时，表示将来的预期。
(C) part of 表示同位语，但 deal 与 million 不是同类，理由与选项 B 相同；分词的形式不能表达出从
句才具有的时态概念。
(D) to make 的修饰对象有歧义，原句是修饰 deal 的，但不定式的逻辑主语又可以是句子主语。
(E)    介词 as 引导的短语在句中充当状语，如同 The news comes as a shock. You need to be able to
work as part of a team.中的 as 一样。这里 as part of…不是同位语，不需要去指代前面哪一个词或者
动作。

希望能够帮助到你 呵呵

wangxiwei

D 的歧异在于 to do一般优先表示主语的动作的目的 在本题里面就是 purchase ... to do....
而在本题里是表示这个 deal to do ...
所以就可能造成歧义 错误

Analee

努力看懂中~咩~
谢谢楼上的大大了~

BreezyCipher

其实D选项的to make改变原意了。原句是will make 表结果，而D选项的to make是表目的。