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发表于 2013-9-29 15:34:49 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
题目:Most of environment issues are toocomplicated, so individuals can do nothing.
In this day and age, it is not uncommon forpeople to complain the environment problem since the severity of someenvironment issue has attracted almost everyone's attention all over the world.The author's statement that single can do no help to the improvement ofenvironment. Is it necessary the case? Personally, the statement is ridiculousand a little exaggerated. In the following paragraphs, i will explain myposition with some careful analysis on two levels.
      To begin with, in the action level, as the saying we all know goes:everyone contributes a little and it would finally make a big difference. Iwould like to paraphrase the sentence in this way-if every single would like togive a hand to save things or help something, the world will move a big stepforward. For example, widespread people in china, obviously, are facing theheavy dust in the air everyday. Do you all think individuals really could donothing but suffering the unhealthy atmosphere? The answer can go withoutsaying. In order to live a wholesome life, everyone just needs lift a fingerlike smoking less, commuting by public transit instead of cars, planting a tinytree, throwing the trash into dustbin, closing a running tap and anything else.There are so many things we could do and what's more, in the long run, theimpact of such actions will do a big favor to the environment.
    Second, in the intellectual level, the world is made up of great numberof individuals. Even though ecosystem and nature are full of mysteriousphenomena human cannot understand, it is not an excuse for man in the world toescape from making the cosmos better. It is human in the world who are the mostadvanced animals, great generators of inventions and excellent innovators ofcreative minds. Definitely, individuals can gather lots of measures or updatenew technology to conquer the environment issue. A report in Yangzi EveningPost showed that severe water shortage in the north of china has been cut downsince 2005 after the policy-transmit the water resource from south to north-adoptedby government. From the example we can see people's wisdom played a significantrole on environment issue.
   Granted, environment issues are resulted from profound and complex relationshipbetween human and nature. An individual might feel he is small when facing aserious problem like the global warming. Also, some individuals might have hadsome practical things done and got no enhancement. However, actually what theydid was a significant relief even if it is not a small reverse.
   To sum up, from the deep discussion and analysis above, we have nodifficulty to get the conclusion that the claim is irrational and unreasonable.Not only should we, as individuals, try our best to make a small dedication,but also exert our knowledge to solve environment issues. No action, no winningforever.     

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