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figobester · 发表于 2008-9-27 08:37:00

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figobester · 发表于 2008-9-27 08:37:00

Land for human need or endangered animals

In today fast-step society, an increasing number factories or farmland have been built at those areas once belong to wild animal. Some claim that human being stop destroy the habitats of animals while some others hold an opposite opinion that the development of human should not be slowed. The way I see it, wild animal should go back to their former habitats since the population of most of them have decreased because of the devastation of habitats places.
Tibetan antelope, in the same family with goats, sheep and deer, is one of the five mascots of the 2008 Beijing Summer Olympic Games. There used to be one million antelopes in Tibet area in China and my mother even take several pictures with these cute mammals. But in an recent investigation, because of the decrease of habitats, these are only about 100 thousand Tibetan antelopes remand.
Huanan Tiger, the wild's answer to Chinese people, is a kind of tiger with bright red fur. People in China like tiger, especially Huanan tigers. My grandpa told me that a century ago Huanan tigers often appeared in the mountain near his former house. So his father do not allowed him to go out at night. But the scientist command that because to increase of city or town areas and almost no area suitable for these tigers to live remand, there are no wild Huanan tigers in China for. We can only watch these dazzling tigers in some Century Zoo.
All in all, Tibetan antelopes and Huanan tigers illustrate that wild animals are now decreasing because of the lost of habitats. Can you imagine a world with lively chirp of bird. What will you feel when you open the window at morning and see nothing but unimagined concrete forest. For me, I do not want my children know knowledge about wild animals only from Discovery Channel.

figobester · 发表于 2008-9-27 08:38:00

Stay in one place or moving in search of another place?

In today's fast-step society, an increasing number people move from one city to another in order to find a better living situation. Some prefer live in different city or country in their life while others hold an opposite that staying in one place is more comfortable. The way I see it, there has a great number of benefits for one to move to another place.
First of all, one can make more friends by changing house, job or school. My father show us a suitable example. My father, now lives in Shenzhen, has lived in many areas like Beijing, Shanghai, Pairs and New York. He's met a great number of persons in these places and made friends with a significant percentage of them. My father often goes to shopping or swimming with some of his friends living in Shenzhen. I vividly remember what he commanded:" One can never have too many friends."
Furthermore, if one can not get success in one place, he or she may be accomplished in another place. Take Beckham, one of the most influential soccer known for his dazzling appearance, for instance. Beckham was born in a poor family in London, which almost all members in his family was fans of Manchester United, one of the greatest soccer club in the world. Beckham had tried to enter some soccer team in London like Arsenal when he was a kid. Unfortunately, no club in this area thought he would be an outstanding player. Then Beckham's father told him:" There are lots of soccer club in England. We can move to another city." Then Beckham's family move to Manchester at his age of 14 and at the same year, he was accepted by Manchester United.
All in all, phenomenal soccer player and my dear father illustrate that It can do benefit to those who live in different areas. Can you imagine a world than only a few mile away from your own house? What will you feel if you open the window in the morning and see nothing but the same scene day by day? For me, I can not suffer to stay at the same house for my whole life.

figobester · 发表于 2008-9-27 08:38:00

Character of a good leader

In today's fast-step society, an increasing number of persons care the character of their boss, keeper, or administrant. Some of then think that their leader should be all-around while others hold an opposite opinion that their keeper can also have some drawbacks. To me, I can not answer this not clear-cut question. But the way I think it, a accomplished leader should have these character.
First of all, he or she should be cunning, which is significant. Take Kangxi, the longest-rule monarch in ancient China, for instance. Because of the suddenly death of his father, Kangxi became the emperor of Qing Dynasty at his age of 6. Because of his appearance as a kid, as time went by, one of the official in the court, Oboi had grown aggressive arrogant and presumptuous and wanted the monarch under control. Kangxi decided to getrid of him. For this decision must be process in utmost secret, The seven-year old ruler planed the whole thing with remarkable cunning. He first train a group of young boys as security guards and then changed the head of the royal army. As the last move, Kangxi asked Oboi to see him along and arrested him with the emperor's security guards. The young monarch win because of his cunning.
Furthermore, an outstanding should be patience. Alex, the coach of Manchester United (The Reds), the greatest soccer club on the earth, show us a suitable example. David Beckham, the most skillful right-half back in England , is the most influential player in Manchester United. After David get a red card, which is the beaten of the game, at the march between Argentina team and cause the lost of England team, all England fans and presses consider Beckham as a playboy. It was a hard time that can knock a person down. Alex called David everyday to encourage him with extraordinary patience at those days and help him to go thought the hard time in Beckham's life. " He is just like my father." Beckham said in his autobiography.
All in all, distinguished monarch and phenomenal soccer coach illustrate the essential characters of a outstanding leading. Just as Mencius, one of the greastest and most influential philosopher in ancient China commanded:" Not every one can be a good leader."

figobester · 发表于 2008-9-27 08:38:00

An Restaurant Nearby
In today's fast-step society, a increasing number of people prefer to have meal in an Restaurant while others hole a opposite opinion that eating at home is better. However, I do not agree to open a restaurant near my home, The way I see it, an restaurant has lots of drawbacks.
First of all, the restaurant will use coal and gas as fuel to cook meal to costumes. The burning of fossil fuel will release carbon dioxide, sulfur dioxide and other pollutant to the atmosphere. Increasing amount of carbon dioxide results in the increase of global temperature. And sulfur dioxide is the direct result of acid rain.
Furthermore, after the restaurant is opened, vast number of people will come from other parts of the city to my neighborhood. And a significant percentage of them will drive car, which will cause traffic jam and even create traffic accident. ZImo, One of my classmates, had to cost over two hour a day to go back home every afternoon just because of the opening of a cinema near her home.
Do not forget that, the local resident used to know each other well and feel safe. The opening of restaurant means an increasing number of customers with different background will come into my community. Some of them may be robber or troublemaker. This may result in an increase in crime rates. When my mother was a young girl, she never went out in the evening since there is lots of man that seem not kind around a pop bar nearby. "My father did not allow girls to have any connect with these danger boys." She said.
All in all, the opening of a new restaurant may cause air pollution, traffic jams, and crime. Can you image a community fill with contaminant, automobiles and danger persons.? What will you feel when you open the window in the morning there is nothing but a noisy world?

figobester · 发表于 2008-9-27 16:21:00

谢谢啦……

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