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一162。 Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

Recently, the issue of some famous stars earning millions of dollars every year has been brought to publican attention.Some people support a high payment  for those stars  ,but others hold an opposite standpoint.Therefore before giving my opinion, it is important to look at on both sides. People who attack paying famous satars huge money  usually give a few or all of the following reasons.The first argument is that those stars' payment for one year is much more than the money that citizens work for their wholy lives.For instance, Yao ming , a famous chinese basketball player, took twenty milliones dollers by accepting  an advertising contract of a computer company.The second is that the high salaries make the audience have to pay more money to whatch a match ,a show or a movie. The third is more effective one: the company has to rise the price of their products for hiring famous stars to take the
advertisment .

People who advocate famous stars deserving the money generally claim that those people have practiced  for years,Just like the  words" one minitue on the stage with ten years practicing".They point that  what they got today  depends on the years' hardwork and inumerable sweats and tears.Such as Wentworth Earl Miler,who finally got the chance to success by playing in 'Prinson Break' when he was 33 years old after over ten years practicing and thousands of interviews.They also often argue that  although famous stars earn much more cash than publicans , they also pay  a lot tax and donate enormous money that usually is used for helping others who have some problems with their lives or health.

As far as my owe expierence is concerned,I believe there are three main  reasons why famous stars deserve a high payment.In the first place,an excellent show or match gives audiences a woncerful time and helps them take a relax from the ordinary works that can't be caculate by money.A high payment is reasonable.In addition, famous stars is not only a group earning huge money from society, but also a group afford  and donate  thousands of money to help other people.  They know returnning to society.Furthermore, famous stars as models for the young people, encourge them to set their goals of lives and work hard for realizing them.