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fishmi · 发表于 2010-8-13 16:11:29

while depressed property values can hurt some large investors,they are potentially devastating for homeownwes,whose equity -in many cases representing a life's savings-can plunge or even disappear.
A they are potentially devastating for homeowners ,whose
B they can potentially devastate homeowners in that their
C for homeowners,they are potentially devastating,because their
D for homeowners,it is potentiallydevastating in that their
E it can potentially devastate homeowners,whose

OG上说答案B“ can potentially" is redundant, ”in that their" is wordy,awkward and ambiguous.为什么啊，为什么啊，不明白。
到底怎么样才算 wordy awkward ambiguous啊

fishmi · 发表于 2010-8-13 21:59:23

有没有大侠来回答一下呀

teddybearj4 · 发表于 2012-4-19 15:59:56

can 和 potentially 都是表示可能性，两个都用重复。
their 这里应该跟前面的they 指代一致，那就都是指代values，但句意应是指代homeowners。

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