我来发我的第一篇习作吧。

都写完了才发现，原来是要写我们国家的，我晕哦。希望考试的时候不要这么粗心。不过已经写出来了，希望大家看看，撇去上面的因素，我到底是什么水平？下周六考，我第一次写哦。

顺便想问一句，我最近打算写几篇，那到底写哪几篇能比较有代表性呢？大家都怎么写的呢？

YOUR CITY HAS DECIDED TO BUILD A STATUE RO MONUMENT TO HONOR A FAMOUS PERSON IN YOUR COUNTRY. WHO WOULD YOU CHOOSE? USE REASONS AND SPECIFIC EXAMPLES TO SUPPORT YOUR CHOICE.

Statues or monuments are often used to memorize one particular person who has contributed much in certain area to a city, a country, or even the world. If my city decided to build a monument or a statue to honor a famous person, I would say, Steven Hawking—an outstanding scientist, must be the best choice.

To start with, Steven Hawking is a preeminent physicist who has, through his significant published book—the Brief History of Time, brought to us a new conception of the world. He is considered to be the most brilliant scientist since Einstein, and his book that talks about the essence of the universe indeed leads a lot of people into the world of science, including me. In modern society, science is given the most importance and Hawking just provides an opportunity to touch the inside principle of the world. Therefore, I hope, motivated by Steven Hawking, our city can make more progress in scientific technology by which the citizen may make a better living.

Furthermore, I believe the life experience of Steven Hawking will offer us far-reaching impact on life. Actually, when he was young, Hawking had been diagnosed a detrimental disease which, as the doctor said, would take Hawking’s life in a few month. After a short period of depression, Steven Hawking did not drop his way in scientific research. Later, even he was disabled, only having the ability to think and move few of his fingers, he kept working with the help of some sophisticated equipment to write his thought. His spirits definitely give us an important lesson about how to face and struggle against difficulties. Even the joke played by the God does not strike Hawking down. Then other people, who can think and move without any difficulty, should never be afraid of any problems which might be confronted in the way for future success.

1.好久没打字了。所以字数不多啊。

2.第一段实际不是论点。

3.下面两段没有主题句

4.没有结尾

完全把Issue的光荣传统给丢了。呵呵。一直在改进！

多谢