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The recently proposed to-be built restaurant notably lead to some hit discussions between our neighbors. A copious number of people strongly deem that the restaurant will definitely bring benefits, both economical and social ones, to our little neighborhood, which has long being harmony and peaceful. On the contrary, other people hold the notion that it’s just a waste of time and money to build such a messy, unclean and annoying restaurant, not to mention the contamination that intertwines with it. As far as I’m concerned, considering the desperate economic situation in our neighborhood, the advent of such a new restaurant will undeniably not only impel our economy to go forward, but also bring convenience to the local.

First of all, it’s definitely true that a new restaurant means more job vacant, which is just coming in handy for our community. To tell you the truth, it’s a common phenomenon in our neighborhood that many laid-off workers just wander around ,doing nothing all day. If there won’t be a new restaurant, how can those idle people get entry to working world? At the same time, a new restaurant will also act as a stimulus to the related commerce fields, for example, it will increase sales of supermarkets,

What’s more, easy access to convenient food will be the second advantage of a newly-set-up restaurant. In contemporary society, a copious number of people are under much more enormous work pressure than their past counterparts. Consequently,the reduction of eating time, to some extend, complement the  inadequate time they spend on work.In other words, an obvious  increase of work efficiency is bound to come. Imagine you’re always engaged in tedious and annoying preparations for a alleged appealing meal and washing of dishes,the vigor of working will gradually fade away. To put it in another way, the convenience that a restaurant  bring you will even fuel your enthusiasm of working.

Last but not least, the proposed restaurant will also serve as a media for neibouring talks.Considering the lack of a public place for residents to sit together and enjoy a cozy dinner time,building such a restaurant must be a better to none alternative.

On the contrast, opponents for this restaurant strongly believe that any project will lead to environmental degradation,not to mention building such a restaurant. A running restaurant will send out smelly odor of oil and dirty water, undoubtedly.Also, noise will last deep into night. But,in fact, these so-called irreversible effects can simply be solved by necessary drainage system and perfectly-arranged opening time.

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The recently proposed to-be built restaurant notably lead to some hit discussions between our neighbors. A copious number of people strongly deem that the restaurant will definitely bring benefits, both economical and social ones, to our little neighborhood, which has long being harmony and peaceful. On the contrary, other people hold the notion that it’s just a waste of time and money to build such a messy, unclean and annoying restaurant, not to mention the contmination that intertwines with it. As far as I’m concerned, considering the desperate economic situation in our neighborhood, the advent of such a new restaurant will undeniably not only impel our economy to go forward, but also bring convenience to the local.

(Recent announcement proposing to build restaurant in neighbors touches off extensive discussion. A fraction of local people recognize that constructing restaurant will definitely offer significant promotion in economy for local community. On the contrary, others hold the notion that doing so is merely resource-waste, because there could not have business opportunity at all in such remote and poor area. From my perspective, a restaurant will inevitably both impel local economy and be convenient to local lives.)