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you have enough money to purchase either a house or a business.Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.

I'm a person who like challenges,so if i have enough money, i will spend it on business instead of buying a house.First because my parents are both businessmen. They use the money they make from business to buy me a computer a mobile phone a PSP a iPod and so on and they told me a lot of experience and ways to make a business when I was a child.

So I think I have a gift of doing business. And I know the mean of money. Although money is not universal, it make you be able to buy what you want and make your life comfortable.So I can use the money I have to make more money. If I want money to come to your pocket, you just need to spend it on business.some years ago, one of friends was only a employee in a small company with a not fat salary. His girl friend told him if he wanted to married her on condition that he would buy her a big house.Buy a big house in my city was day-dream for him. He love his girlfriend, so he designed to make business with the whole money he had. Finally he bought a big house to his girlfriend and got married with her.Now he is the riched friend of mine. 

The second reason is thar I can gain varieties of abilities when you are making business. I have to caculate how much you will spend on it and how much you will get from it.I need to focus on what is popular and attractive to the customers and on their tastes and thoughts. and I need to learn how to get in touch with a lot of people who is strange to me and make them support my business. I also need to learn how to keep calm and confident when I is encountering a problem even I lose all my money on my business. It is said that if you want be a businessman first you should be a good man. Because others will work with you in your business only if they feel your honest and out-standing aspects. What's more, people wil know a businessman according to the ways in which he make business.

Although purchasing business will bring me a lot of risk and buying a house is safe just as saving money in the bank. But you will just own a house if you give up the try on the business. No one refuse the money in the right way when it is just in front of him.Purchasing a business can also offer you a house if you make an effort on it and have a not bad luck.So if i have enough money, i will spend it on business.