[求助] 刚写好一篇， 希望德克的猪和大家给出意见阿。

99 You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students.
Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you
rather choose your own roommate? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

  Told to share my dormitory rooms with another student, I wanted to choose my own dormmate instead of being assigned one. Choosing someone you are familiar with is always a wiser option than to live with someone you might not know at all.
  Firstly, living with a friend means saftety, which is the most concern that many university students worry about. Helping each other, roommates are able to establish good friendship and a good environment. Fearing nothing, we feel more relaxed and comfortable. S/He may not be responsible for everything, at least they will help to defend your property when caught in a blaze or a flood. An anonymous arsonist set a fire in the campus and it was Rossie's dormitory roommate, who helped her to get all of her things out of that blaze. As a friend of mine, Rossie told me this frightening story. She said that it was her luck that she could pick her own roommate, otherwise she wouldn't know what could happpen.
  Secondly, a good roommate monitors you and gives you truly advices. Unlike some others, who leads you astray. Still remembering my friend Tom was not able to choose his own roommate so that he went astray while in the first year, I feel sorry for him. With little knowing about the other person you are going to live with, it could be a dangerous thing. My friend Tom's story examplify this perspective clearly: not only did he take part in a gang group, but also did he try drugs and marijuana. As a result, he ruined his own life. If he could just pick a roommate he knew, he would be able to stay in his own path and embrace a bright future.
  To conclude, it couldn't be a better choice to choose your friends to live with when deciding who to live with, and that sometimes guarantees your life and future.

感觉这次写得好像没有话说了。总感觉理论东西太少。 只好举了两个不切实际的例子。（人都是编的啊）。希望大家给出意见吧。。