[作文]第一次新手作文！请求高人指点！

这是我第一次练习作文，估计语法水平只相当于初中，里面还可能有很多CHINGLISH，请高手们狠拍。

我912就要考了，语法不知道还有没有提高的可能，我想更加注重一下结构和模式，恳请高手们们在这方面多多给予意见和建议，谢谢了！

题目：

62. What do you want most in a friend — someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.

正文：

In my point of view, all these three characteristics are important. A intelligent friend can make me wisdom. A friend with sense of humor can bring me amusement and happiness. But I prefer a reliable friend whom I could trust, rely on, and ask for help when I am in trouble.  

Living in the world, we are not independent individuals but a part of the society. If we do not have a friend worth trusting, we will feel lonely and helpless. With a reliable friend, we may share our happiness and pains, especially share our secrets without worrying to be betrayed. I have such a friend when I was a child, she never told anyone else the things I wanted to keep as secrets. Till now, we still keep in touch with each other and there are still many things only we two know in the world.（这样的没有太多实质内容的例子不知道符不符合要求？）

We may meet numerous problems in our life. At these difficult times, we need a reliable friend to turn to. Just as the proverb says, a friend in need is a friend in deed. I remember one scene in the novel HARRY POTTER AND THE DEATHLY HALLOWS. Hermione asked Harry, 'Do you trust me?' Harry nodded and did as Hermione told him without asking a word, even exposed himself to the enemies. Of cause, Hermione brought them to safe place at last. This kind of solid friendship is the one we are looking forward to.

In conclusion, reliability is really significant between friends. It is the fundamental of a lasting and solid friendship. Not only looking for such a friend, but also I myself should be a reliable person to my friends.

中间两段的开头，总觉得没有鲜明的观点，但是如果一上来就讲观点，又觉得字数不够，怎么办呀？现在只有279字，是不是还是不够？请在总体构架和字数发展上也帮忙指点下吧！