求助，"to do and to do"是必须的平行结构么？可以省略第二个to么 ---- OG2017 SC 696

WytheWong · 发表于 2017-4-30 15:55:49

SC 696 Thefoundation works to strengthen local and regional agricultural markets and cooperatingwith government, improving access for farmers for productive resources suchas land and credit.
(A) cooperating with government, improving access for farmers for
(B) cooperates with government to improve access for farmers to
(C) cooperate with government for improvements of access for farmers to
(D) cooperate with governments and improve accessibility for farmers for their
(E) in cooperation with government to improve access for farmers for
OA：B

我做这道题一开始的思路是找平行，选了C，虽然感觉那个improvement十分redudant，但是还是选了C。其实我不确定 cooperate应该和 work平行还是应该和strengthen平行，OG给的答案是和works平行，然后work to cooperate比较awkward，我可以理解B了。但是我在考虑如果是其他题，我可以可以用“to do and to do” 直接排除c和d？简化一下问题，“to do and to do ”是铁则吗？to "do and do"这样可以平行吗？
求大神解答，万谢

whyade · 发表于 2017-4-30 17:49:29

我记得白勇语法里说的是，多个不定式平行时，除第一个不定式外，后面的不定式的to可以都保留或都省略。
我觉得这道题：
1）work应该是“作用于”的意思，从逻辑意思上看cooperate和work平行更好，如果cooperate和strengthen平行，那么后面实际上就变成work to cooperate with...，感觉work有点多余。
2）C 的 for improvements 是 wordy 的用法，一般表目的用不定式。
所以不用纠结to do and to do的问题，而是从逻辑意思上判断。

WytheWong · 发表于 2017-4-30 20:42:42

whyade 发表于 2017-4-30 17:49
我记得白勇语法里说的是，多个不定式平行时，除第一个不定式外，后面的不定式的to可以都保留或都省略。
我 ...

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屡战屡败 · 发表于 2017-5-1 08:34:48

这道题这么做
The foundation works to strengthen local and regional agricultural markets and cooperating with government, improving access for farmers for productive resources suchas land and credit.
(A) cooperating with government, improving access for farmers for
(B) cooperates with government to improve access for farmers to
(C) cooperate with government for improvements of access for farmers to
(D) cooperate with governments and improve accessibility for farmers for their
(E) in cooperation with government to improve access for farmers for

A：coorporating不能和and前面任何一个动词平行，不符合逻辑
B：coorporates和works平行，看起来没有错
C：cooperate和strengenth平行，没有错，但是coorporate的目标是“improvements”，而不是B中的目标“improve access for farmers to resources”
D：improve和coorporate平行，不符合逻辑，improve是coorporate的目的
E：in coorporation是名词破坏了and的平行。

这道题的关键不是to do这个固定搭配而是coorporate的目的是什么
C之所以错了是因为合作的目的是一个“improvement”；cooperate with government for improvements of access for farmers to
而B的目的“improve access for farmers to resources”

WytheWong · 发表于 2017-5-1 13:16:07

屡战屡败发表于 2017-5-1 08:34
这道题这么做
The foundation works to strengthen local and regional agricultural markets and cooperat ...

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