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Nowadays, as the science technology develop in a rapid pace,the influence which human bring to our earth has become more and more significant.although we used these advanced technology to improve our living condition in many ways,we also damaged our earth by consuming her resource,polluting her environment and destroying her ecosystem balance.

Since it took a very long period of time to form resources like coal,oil and nature gas which are imperative for our lives,we should cherish but not consume them as possible as we can.however,the more advanced our society is,the more wasteful we make to our earth.for instance,there are few cars which burn lots of oil travelled on the road in the past,but now,even a family owns one or two cars,not to mention the goverments and  companies.the large a mount of oil uesd by the numerous cars everyday makes the whole oil reserves decreased in a terrible speed.some scentist predicted that there would be no more oil for our people to utilize in thirty years.

On the other hand,the consuming of the resources consequently bring another serious problem to our earth--pollution.the buring of fuel let out gases which are always harmful to people and the earth as well.the air condition today is much worse than it used to be.we can no longer find out a place which has not been polluted.as the area of forests becoming smaller and smaller, instead of the green trees, perhaps we can only see a large area of deserts in future.In additionally,the pollution cause the greenhouse effect which makes the earth getting warmer than before.more icebergs will melt and it will cause floods to people who live near the sea.

Finally,the bad effects on the ecosystem balance can not be ignored.many kinds of animals were extinct in past few years.although laws have been constituted to protect the last few precious species, even more species are giong to die out,because of the polluted environment and people hunting for money by sending them to some illegal restaurants.when the day that there are only human beings live in earth comes,the only future for ourselves is extinct as well.

Nowadays, as the science technology develops in a rapid pace, the influence which human make on our earth has become more and more significant. Although we used these advanced technology to improve our living condition in many ways, we also damaged our earth by exhausting the resource, polluting the environment and breaking the ecosystem balance.

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