gwd17-Q14

14. GWD17-Q14:

Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.

A.      Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete

B.      Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies

C.      The lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, unlike the Internet where they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete

D.      Unlike more established industries, where the lines of competition are clearly defined, they are burred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as companies that compete

E.       Unlike more established industries, with clearly defined lines of competition, those of the Internet industry are blurred and indistinct, as competing companies

A错在哪里了呢？

A沒錯

B的industries that are more established -->wordy

A的the more established industries-->concise

whereas表對比 ,A若沒有邏輯上的錯誤,則BCDE都要出現表對比的邏輯 

B 的although有讓步之意,whereas對比強烈

in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct非严格平行对应Whereas lines of

但更主要的错误在于as后面应加完整句,而A非完整句

本题正确答案应为B

"competing companies" in B改變了原意? 没有吧!

as后面应加完整句,而A非完整句.

个人保留意见,见谅.

不明白你在说什么  A选项AS后面就是个完整句

as companies
            that compete one day may be partners the next.

that compete one day 定语从句修饰 companies  主干是 companies maybe partner the next

whats wrong with it?

A 中as后怎么会不是完整句子呢？

    as companies （that compete one day） may be partners the next.