correct:"Jose Canseco is still a feared batter, most pitchers don't want to face him."
this sentence still seems a run-on sentence to me,
is it "," or ";" can mm double check for me?
thanks~
see example
10. However much United States voters may agree that there is waste in government and that the government as a whole spends beyond its means, it is difficult to find broad support for a movement toward a minimal state.
(A) However much United States voters may agree that
(B) Despite the agreement among United States voters to the fact
(C) Although United States voters agree
(D) Even though United States voters may agree(A)
(E) There is agreement among United States voters that
A is the best choice. ...because E starts with an independent rather than a subordinate clause and separates its two independent clauses with a comma, it creates a run-on sentence with no logical connection established between the halves.
71. The original building and loan associations were organized as limited life funds, whose members made monthly payments on their share subscriptions, then taking turns drawing on the funds for home mortgages.
(A) subscriptions, then taking turns drawing
(B) subscriptions, and then taking turns drawing
(C) subscriptions and then took turns drawing
(D) subscriptions and then took turns, they drew(C)
(E) subscriptions and then drew, taking turns
The wording in D results in a run-on sentence and does not specify what the members took turns doing.
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