魔板共享

unight · 发表于 2003-12-31 01:43:00

上次死在了TWE上，这次（12.17考得）自己做了个魔板，刚查了分，6。0,hehe..考得时候就是掏了自己的魔板，贴出来希望对大家有用：）

When it comes to ---, different people hold different views due to their respective angles. Some people would support --, while others--. But from my point of view, if I were faced with such issue, I would definitely choose … There are numerous reasons why I choose---, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones as follows.

The main reason for my position is that--. A good example may be found in the case that.... Under this circumstance/therefore, it is obvious that.

Another reason why—is that I believe that---. Both common sense and our experiences with… inform us that…History witnesses and provides many examples.。。。So,...

Moreover, just as an individual needs challenges to ---, I believe that。。In sum,...

Admittedly, there is no denying that...in some conditions.. Nevertheless, providing that~~, we can see clearly that the advantages of--- outweigh the benefits…

Taking into account of all these factors, we can safely reach the conclusion that… In fact, not only do I support..., but I also suggest--.

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Verdun · 发表于 2003-12-31 05:33:00

thanks

laker2003 · 发表于 2003-12-31 06:18:00

我上次死在作文上 4。0 这次作文得了5。5 却死在了听力上听力和阅读比上次还差郁闷啊！

form99 · 发表于 2004-1-1 00:45:00

unight:

would you like to give us some examples for us to understand your composition model more deeply?

bbt · 发表于 2004-1-1 11:40:00

我也用了自己的魔板，希望和你一样lucky，呵呵

sweetlemon · 发表于 2004-1-2 14:22:00

可是托福的作文不全都是选择题目啊~~

unight · 发表于 2004-1-2 15:23:00

嗬嗬，大同小异的。。第一段稍稍改改，多选一，就多写几个观点（这样，字数肯定比2选一还多）， statement的话也是陈述一下想象中的可能有的人们的反应~~，余下的套用不就得啦：）
感觉关键是做了魔板就要用熟了然后鬼扯例子，一定要留下2，3分钟检查，因为错误总是会用的，除非你是大牛^-^（事实上，考前俺也没写几篇，所以也没法贴例文了）
另，一些联结词：
Time and frequency
In general, every, some, after, on the whole, usually, most, at other times, in most cases, frequently, main, finally, as a rule, rarely, before, meanwhile
Addition
Additionally, as well as, just as, again, along with, also, further, furthermore, likewise, in the same way, in addition to,
Example
For example, for instance, namely, as an example, that is
Transition
Although, instead, rather than, but , nevertheless, though, however, on the other hand, otherwise
Conclusion
All in all, in consequence, in brief, as a result, the point is, in conclusion, consequently, therefore, hence, in sum
为防ets发现用魔板，感觉连接词多改改应该就没问题了。。
happy new year~~

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algal · 发表于 2004-1-2 17:49:00

Thanks. Unight

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鲁西西 · 发表于 2004-1-5 12:12:00

为什么有人说写作文直接抄题目然后把main reason缩写下，在first，second然后in summary就好了，说是不要在开头写什么废话。

godsamuel · 发表于 2004-1-5 12:36:00

我认为是要用自己的话对题目进行改写，再引出个人观点。
受益非浅，对谢UNIGHT！

魔板共享

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