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126 .Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people

In the course of  this controversy issue, some people might hold the perception that the young are not entitled to teach the old mainly due to the consideration that the youth are lack of experiences and observation in many ways. From my point of view,  I, however, would personally advocate the attitude that that young people are fully eligible to teach older people to some degree. This notion is of particular importance. Thus, manifested below are some of the major reasons and evidence that make me subscribe to this concept.

In today’s modern society, the development of technology and science are greatly improved on a brick-by-brick basis. As a result, there is a great likelihood that the young are capable of updating their information faster than the older people. Why? Because of human nature and customs, young people, in terms of trend, knowledge and so the like, are even more acceptable as well as curious than the older ones. Hence, young people are undoubtedly more equipped with latest information which may includes art, novelty and science.

To further probe, teaching by definition is either to teach the know-how that people have no ideas about or to help them obtain knowledge. Therefore, no topic is more fundamental now than this one that young people are unable or inappropriate to instruct older ones since the formers are well-informed ahead of the later. Facts as well as experiences witness and present many examples: according to statistics, those who are good at operating computers are young people other than older ones. For this reason, there is no better illustration that can exhibit the strength of young people’s abilities to teach older ones.

Superior as young people’s abilities are, nevertheless, Being taught by young people also has own demerits as well. For example, they are probably unable to cope with some problems lack of life experiences. Yet, the advantages of the notion which I place my full reliance weigh against that of disadvantages of being taught by older people. Consequently, my striking assertion is obvious through this factor.

Jump to a conclusion, based on the discussion mentioned above, we can safely come to a statement that being taught by young people could be regarded as a better alternative rather than that by older ones. Compared to young people, I must concede that older one are possibly to teach well but no one can ignore the added convenience offered by being taught young people. This is what makes young people themselves excel in the issue.

In the course of  this controversy issue (controversy and issue are both nouns. You can say either one of those, or controversial issue) , some people might hold the perception that the young (generations?? Young people? Something is missing here) are not entitled to teach the old mainly due to the consideration that the youth (this is the incorrect expression)  are lack of experiences and observation in many ways. From my point of view, I (redundant, because you said that it’s in your point of view) , however, would personally advocate the attitude that that young people are fully eligible to teach older people to some degree. This notion is of particular importance. Thus, (what manifested ?? missing a noun) manifested below are some of the major reasons and evidence (evidences) that make me subscribe to this concept.

In today’s modern society, the development of technology and science are greatly improved on a brick-by-brick basis. As a result, there is a great likelihood that the young (ones) are capable of updating their information faster than the older people. Why? Because of human nature and customs, young people, in terms of trend, knowledge and so the like(??), are even more acceptable (acceptable of what?? This point is not clear)as well as curious than the older ones. Hence, young people are undoubtedly more equipped with (the) latest information which may includes art, novelty and science.

Jump to a conclusion, based on the discussion mentioned above, we can safely come to a statement that being taught by young people could be regarded as a better alternative rather than that by older ones. (I disagree. To my understanding, your point is that young ones are equally capable of educating older ones. You didn’t really improve that they are BETTER in any ways)  Compared to young people, I must concede that older one are possibly to teach well but no one can ignore the added convenience offered by being taught young people. This is what makes young people themselves excel in the issue.

By the way, another way of saying young people is “youngsters”

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