我觉得E不对,应该选D。说说我的理由哦。 1.E里面的have是个大问题。在OG里面,have和with一般是不能混用的,OG-10里面的例题,我看到现在,have作实义动词时,都是作possess的意思,跟中文里的“有”含义是不同的。这里说这些tomato ‘possess’bruises,显然是不对的。OG里have的用法,可以看看下面这道题: 165. At Shiprock, New Mexico, a perennially powerful girls' high school basketball team has become a path to college for some and a source of pride for a community where the household incomes of 49 percent of them are below the poverty level. (A) where the household incomes of 49 percent of them are (B) where they have 49 percent of the household incomes (C) where 49 percent of the household incomes are (D) which has 49 percent of the household incomes (E) in which 49 percent of them have household incomes C, the best choice, uses a clear, direct, and economical adjective clause to indicate the percentage of household incomes below the poverty line in the community in question. Choices A and E insert the pronoun them without a stated antecedent. In addition, the wording of both A and E confuses the percentage of community residents (the implied referent of them) with the percentage of households, not the same thing at all. Choice B introduces the pronoun they without an antecedent. Furthermore, the use of have in B and E and of has in D illogically suggests that the community possesses 49% of all the household incomes below the poverty line. 2.but they are...这里的they are是redundant。正如wei_wangyan所言,although后面的they are要么保留,要么全部省掉,但在D里面,they are确实同时省略了,although more flavorful。 3.姑且不论have的问题,有人说E是平行对称结构,那么我要问的是,为什么要写成“they are often green and striped, or have plenty of bumps and bruises, but they are”?如果but 后面的they are补出,为什么要用or have,不用or they have? 所以我觉得D对 抛砖引玉,请大家多多指正 |