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这是用ETS的网上评过的文章,看到ETS给打的4分简直郁闷死了.为什么4分?问题出在哪里?请大家帮忙分析.谢谢了.
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The 21st century has begun,what changes do you think the new century will bring? Use exmaples and detalis in your answer.
The 21st century has begun. Thanks to the development of the technology we have gained a lot from the past centuries and the new century will bring us more new changes.
The becoming century has more plans to develop our society of which the space exploration is one option. Because the modern industry the earth has been polluted, a majority of the nature resource has been exhausted and the greenhouse effect have not been solved. Thus maybe one day the earth will not be suitable for human being to live, we may need to find another planet to replace the earth. An other reason for my opinion is that some experiments can be achieved without the gravity in the space . Scientists have grew some plants in the space to fiend the relationships between plants and gravity.
Of all the changes , the use of the machine is the second important one that influences us a lot. In the past days we have to carry out extensive calculations by hand. It took us several days to solve the problem, and now we can get the results in several seconds. We have washing machine to wash clothes for us and we have car to take us to anywhere we want. Some jobs are very harmful to human body .we could not finish them by hand, thus the machines are very useful to us. Using machine not only increase the quantity of the products but also save lots of time. Using machines is perfect, isn’t it?
The changes be brought to us are countless, I believe the new century will make the earth wonderful.
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发表于 2005-9-30 02:06:00
