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楼主
发表于 2005-9-15 14:18:00 | 只看该作者

[分享]热门Topic 163

Reading and writing is a vital part of our daily life. In the past, ancient people formally communicate with others by means of writing and also learn a wealth of knowledge by reading. Likewise, these essential communicating methods are still utilized nowadays. As far as I concerned, as input and output ways for human beings, nothing is more important than the ability to read and write.



Firstly, the significance of reading relies on the fact that there is an information era today. It is universally acknowledged that there is a variety of information that overflows with our life by means of television, radio, newspapers and so forth. Under such circumstances, it seems to be important for people to keep and even improve their ability to read. Apparently, whatever we want to learn, like current weather forecast or latest news, the ability to read will be able to directly reflect how much we learn.



Secondly, Writing is the cornerstone of expressing what people's thought. Besides reading, on no account can we ignore the ability to write. Not only can a high-quality essay contribute a student to obtain a desirable offer from a couple of universities they apply, but also an excellent cover letter is absolutely instrumental for a stuff to get a decent job.



The last but not least, there is no denying that to read and write are able to be conducive to people's mental ability. According to recent survey in united state, those who usually read and write are much more intelligent than those who lack of reading and writing. That is why human beings’ society never stops developing since ancient time.



To sum up, the statement that the ability to read and write is less important than in the past is groundless. On the contrary, we can not emphasize the important of the ability to read and write too much. What’s more, we should not only bring to home people the value of reading and writing, but also get into the habit of keeping reading and writing everyday as soon as possible.

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2005-9-15 22:37:00 | 只看该作者
请斑主品评!!
板凳
发表于 2005-9-16 04:13:00 | 只看该作者
Reading and writing (pl.)is (wrong,should be "are")a vital part of our daily life. In the past, ancient people formally communicate with others by means of writing and also learn a wealth of knowledge by reading. Likewise, these essential communicating methods are still utilized nowadays. As far as I concerned, as input and output ways for human beings, nothing is more important than the ability to read and write.(没有说明当今社会更加重视这两个能力,偏题了)



Firstly, the significance of reading relies on the fact that there is an information era today. It is universally acknowledged that there is a variety of information that overflows with our life by means of television, radio, newspapers and so forth. Under such circumstances, it seems to be important for people to keep and even improve their ability to read. Apparently, whatever we want to learn, like current weather forecast or latest news, the ability to read will be able to directly reflect how much we learn.



Secondly, Writing is the cornerstone of expressing what people's thought. Besides reading, on no account can we ignore the ability to write. Not only can a high-quality essay contribute a student to obtain a desirable offer from a couple of universities they apply, but also an excellent cover letter is absolutely instrumental for a stuff to get a decent job.



The last but not least, there is no denying that to read and write are able to be conducive to people's mental ability. According to recent survey in united state, those who usually read and write are much more intelligent than those who lack of reading and writing. That is why human beings’ society never stops developing since ancient time.



To sum up, the statement that the ability to read and write is less important than in the past is groundless. On the contrary, we can not emphasize the important of the ability to read and write too much. What’s more, we should not only bring to home people the value of reading and writing, but also get into the habit of keeping reading and writing everyday as soon as possible.



每一段的开头,尽量换一下,这种结构非常普遍了。


写得还可以。


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