Hurricanes at first begin traveling from east to west, because that direction is the way the prevailing winds in the tropics blow, but they then veer off toward higher latitudes, in many cases changing direction toward the east before dissipating over the colder, more northerly waters or over land.
2. Hurricanes at first begin traveling from east to west, because that direction is the way the prevailing winds in the tropics blow, but they then veer off toward higher latitudes, in many cases changing direction toward the east before dissipating over the colder, more northerly waters or over land.

(A) Hurricanes at first begin traveling from east to west, because that direction is the way the prevailing winds in the tropics blow, but
(B) At first, hurricanes travel from east to west, because that is the direction of the prevailing winds in the tropics, but
(C) While hurricanes travel from east to west at first, the direction of the prevailing winds blowing in the tropics, and
(D) Because hurricanes at first travel from east to west, since it is the direction of the prevailing winds in the tropics,
(E) Hurricanes, beginning by traveling from east to west, because this is the direction of the prevailing winds in the tropics,可不可以帮我看看C选项为什么错，看了解释也不是很懂，谢谢啦
致命伤：
While Clause 1, and Clause 2 中间不能挂and
其他错误：
direction of wind blow of不好，应该用direction in which wind blow
from east to west at first, the direction the direction作同位语修饰from east to west，中间隔了at first不好
看原句，首先要确认句子的主体是什么。像这个句子，很明显主要是描述hurricanes, 因此选项中不以h为主语的都有改写句子原意的嫌疑。C选项，the direction of是一个名词，不能够和and 后面的句子进行并列（and连接的各个部分要保持形式和逻辑上的平行）。
正确句子的架构为：H travels..., because clause, but they veer off..., in many cases changing...
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