OG 16 SC 第2题 求解

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mogiinntu

春暖花开19 发表于 2016-7-27 23:40
that在这里作为形式主语是可以独立存在的，就像that可以放在句首做主语。而且在这里有明确指代，并没有裸 ...

但不是that不能代替同样的东西吗？只能是new copies，这里显然是同样的东西啊  求NN解答

噜啦啦biu

mogiinntu 发表于 2017-4-4 11:05
但不是that不能代替同样的东西吗？只能是new copies，这里显然是同样的东西啊  求NN解答 ...

我不是NN哈 我是一只挣扎的学渣 但是觉得有东西可以分享   that在这里是对的　就是指代east to west  我说不出来具体的语法内容 因为我不太懂这些

我觉得关于pronoun这块　可以先不用纠结　做题时先关注大的关系。原句虽然表述不对，但是意思是很清楚的。
Hurricanes at first begin traveling from east to west, because that direction is the way the prevailing winds in the tropics blow, but they then veer off toward higher latitudes, in many cases changing direction toward the east before dissipating over the colder, more northerly waters or over land.
1.hurricanes at first travel from east to west
2.the direction is the way the prvailling winds below (modifier 解释的 why hurricanes travel from west to east )
3.they then veer off toward higher latitudes (转向高纬度）
hurricanes travel.....because .... but they then .....大概就是这个结构
所以就可以delete CDE了
具体来讲
(C) While hurricanes travel from east to west at first, the direction of the prevailing winds blowing in the tropics, and
and ??? 关系不对，明明是转折；并且and 前是个fragment 。the direction .......????
(D) Because hurricanes at first travel from east to west, since it is the direction of the prevailing winds in the tropics,
because hurricanes travel from esat to west ,they then veer off ???? 非常不合逻辑
(E) Hurricanes, beginning by traveling from east to west, because this is the direction of the prevailing winds in the tropics,they then veer off...
hurricanes ,because ........,they then veer off ?? delete !!!
然后再来看下AB  
对比下AB 两个选项，就可以看到at first/ begin redundat
对于一个500来分的渣渣讲  不敢止步 在网上搜到了一个印度NN 的其他解释 我还挺喜欢的 （因为A 就是看着不顺眼，但不知道为什么 ）

Two issues:
1) "begin travelling" is wordy as we can replace with "travel". We need a simple present to make it parallel with "veer off" -> another simple present verb.觉得这一点讲的很合我心意
2) "is the way the prevailing winds in the tropics blow" -> is too wordy and can be easily replaced by construction in option B) 那个方向是盛行风吹得方向 这样看meaning 确实很wordy 直接说那是盛行风的方向即可

zoe爱猕猴桃

来一个曼哈顿语法，要哭了
this, that, these, those 在句子中不能裸奔，必须用作this/that/those/these+n 的结构才能做代词使用，而这个名词则是能体现先行词性质的词。(this, those, that and these are never used as a stand-alone pronoun without a noun following)
EG：New ”nano-papers” incorporate fibers that give THESE MATERIALS strength,

小卒学英语

guoyilin2015 发表于 2015-9-28 09:43
致命伤：
While Clause 1, and Clause 2   中间不能挂and
其他错误：

正确答案中 也是用了 direction of..

丁丁丁淼淼

曼哈顿里说  that  在除了指代new copy 以外的情况下不能裸奔的  是指  如果这个that  指代的是一个名词   则 that不能裸奔…这个句子里  that  指代的east to west不是名词  所以这一条规则不适用…（不是指代direction啊  毕竟前的主句是没有direction的）
我是这么理解的  不知道对不对…