TWE182

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TWE182:Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

As our fast-pace society proceeds, it is concerned that human lack sufficient face-to-face communication, even between family and close friends(within families and among close friends), leaving the feeling of loneliness often accompanying people(lots of people hounted by the feeling of loneliness). Therefore sometimes many people have a close relationship with their pets and they treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In my point of view this sound opinion has reasons proved it to be true. 这里好像有问题。Anyway, 开头很好！

To start with, animal-companionship has a definite, positive effect on the emotion of people. It is inevitable that nowadays, the time that young people spend on staying with their parents and other relatives keeps decreasing because they must give more time on keeping their positions in a（an） increasing competitive society, leaving the elderly people alone(和开头里的句式有重复了，最好换别的). Pets could provide companionship, enjoyment and unconditional love for the lonely elderly people to fight loneliness. Moreover, pets benefit the sense of security to their owners. For instance, the dogs always play a loyal role as a door guard at the entrance of owner’s house.

On the other hand, pets that are man’s best friends are being credited with providing not only companionship to human, but health benefits to many as well. To care the pets, owners surely increase their out-door activities day by day. According to a research done by a USA organization, people who foster pets have better health than non pet owners这里的用法不确定, leading to annual health savings about 500 million（an annual saving of 500 million on the health care ）. Based on this kind of facts, people increasingly recognize and accept (are increasingly recognizing)the health impact these animals have on the human being(the health of human beings).

Admittedly, the relations with animals also bring some troubles to their owners. For example, when the owners have a trip, they have to deliver the pets to their friends or relatives who might not be interested in the animals.

All in all, from what I have discussed above , it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that the relationship with the pets has many benefits because the pets would contribute to the emotion of owners as well as the health. 最好再加一句，如采取措施减少动物对人的不利影响。这样结尾会更丰满。