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TWE 015 呵呵,模仿一篇,请给看看

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楼主
发表于 2004-9-17 21:11:00 | 只看该作者

TWE 015 呵呵,模仿一篇,请给看看

模仿了pumpkin和gladys_gl的文章,呵呵,在此谢过。


TWE 015  Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.



Neighbors are the people who live near us and a good neighbor could be our best friend in the daily life. What qualities should a good neighbor have? When faced with such a question, people would present many different answers according to respective angles, such as generosity, patience etc. In my view, however, I advocate that a good neighbor should be the person who is warm-hearted, considerate and sensible. My arguments are presented as follows.



To begin with, a warm-hearted neighbor owns one of the most precious personality traits. Such a person is helpful and unselfish. He is always willing to give his neighbors help whenever they are trapped into difficulties. For example, when there are some emergencies in one’s family and the couple must leave home immediately, only leaving the 3 years old boy at home. A warm-hearted neighbor would be glad to take care of his neighbors’ kid, like providing him with food, until the parent comes back. When his neighbors are sick, he would visit them in hospital and extend the best wishes. All these activities could build a strong tie between him and his neighbors, leading to an improved and harmonious atmosphere, in which people are happy and compatible.



Next, a good neighbor should be considerate, which would be beneficial to the relationship of neighbors. As we all know, people like to live in a quiet and tranquil environment. However, some neighbors of them always make big noise like playing music loudly, no matter at daytime or in evenings. When you are trying to finish your paper, how can you concentrate on the study with such a loud noise? Neighbors who are considerate will never act on this way such as talking or singing in the backyard at midnight to annoy others. In fact, they always think of neighbor’s benefits while doing something and descend the negative influence to the least. Thus, the relations between neighbors will be enhanced and promoted.



Furthermore, sensibility means that a good neighbor is not annoying other persons with trivial or private issues. Everyone would rather guard some personal privacy and secrecy. They do not want other people to mention some sensitive topics such as money or age. A wise and sensible neighbor is able to make clear which direction of talking is correct, avoiding embarrassing situations and bringing the pleasant topics.



As discussed above, a warm-hearted, considerate and sensible neighbor is the best to associate with. Although there may be some other personality traits that are satisfying such as generosity and patience, the three points proved here are obviously of primary importance. This kind of neighbor is always welcome in every community.




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沙发
发表于 2004-9-17 23:15:00 | 只看该作者

还是楼上的MM厉害,好文章。

偶还要加油哦

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2004-9-18 10:15:00 | 只看该作者

呵呵,谢谢gladys_gl的鼓励,偶觉得你写的很好啊,偶还要向你学习呢,咱们一起加油吧。

各位NN帮改改吧,除了自己改,感觉别人的批改也非常有帮助有必要的,能够帮我拓宽思路,加深对错误的记忆,以及更好的用一些词汇和句型。如上次pengstone和soaring_2004两位版主给我提出的provide sb with sth,估计以后是不会再出错了。

地板
发表于 2004-9-18 10:56:00 | 只看该作者

看起来还是姐妹们比较团结~

+u+u

5#
 楼主| 发表于 2004-9-18 11:02:00 | 只看该作者
呵呵,kui kui 别光生气我们姐妹团结啊,给点宝贵意见吧。
6#
发表于 2004-9-18 11:25:00 | 只看该作者

kui哥,你好帅噢。


偶觉的偶拍KuiGG的 MP 也不少了, KUI G 时候帮我改改作文啊,


随后写一片给你批批如何。


[此贴子已经被作者于2004-9-18 11:31:37编辑过]
7#
发表于 2004-9-18 12:30:00 | 只看该作者
楼主JJ加油,很不错的文章,偶都不晓得怎么改了,呵呵
8#
发表于 2004-9-18 15:25:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用guoliwei在2004-9-18 11:02:00的发言:
呵呵,kui kui 别光生气我们姐妹团结啊,给点宝贵意见吧。


姐妹齐心,其利断金。
9#
发表于 2004-9-18 15:27:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用gladys_gl在2004-9-18 11:25:00的发言:

kui哥,你好帅噢。


偶觉的偶拍KuiGG的 MP 也不少了, KUI G 时候帮我改改作文啊,


随后写一片给你批批如何。



义不容辞。可以发论坛短信通知。

10#
发表于 2005-6-5 12:10:00 | 只看该作者
THANKS~写得很好
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