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TOPIC:Some people believe that university students should be required
to attend classes.Other believe that going to classes should be
optional for students.Which point do you agree with?Use specific
reasons and details to explain your answer.

Depending on personal experience and personality type,
we find that some people hold the opinion that university
students should be required to attend classes. However,
others contradict it. As far as I am concerned, I agree that
students should be requested to attend classes.

There are numerous reasons why students should take part in classes,
and I would in here explain a few of the most important ones.
The main reason for my propensity for attending classes is that
students can learn the most important knowledge in the class. It
is well known that teachers know what the most useful knowledge
is in books. In the class, teachers will tell students which part
they should grasp, which part they should know, and so on. In
addition, students can ask teachers what you do not know when they
study. In short, even though there are many different views
concerning this topic, in my part, I also would like to vote for
attending classes.

Another reason why I choose to attend classes is that students can
communicate with each other. In classes, you can know the methods of
other students. It is very important for students to study each other.
Furthermore, you can communicate with others. You can know what other
students think and do. Through communication in the class, you can
not only study knowledge, but also study to discuss with others. So,
in my opinion, attending classes is a wise choice.

One very strong argument for attending classes is that it is easy for
universities to manage students. Students have more free time in
universities than before. Some students can not manage themselves.
They play games every day to kill their time. When they attend classes,
teachers can know those who do not study. Then teachers can help
those students get rid of bad habits and study harder than before.
No wonder, attending classes brings students the effects that they
can not get if universities do not demand students to attend classes.

Of course, optionally attending classes has advantages to some extent.
For example, students have more time to do what they like. But if all
these factors are contemplated, the advantages of attending classes
carry more weight than those of optionally going to classes.

From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion
that universities should require students to attend classes. This has
a lot of benefits. In fact, I am convinced by its effects and
advantages, and recommend this standpoint to those universities which
take responsibility to students.

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