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伤不起的TOEFL作文!请高手帮忙修改!!!求严格!

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发表于 2012-9-20 21:37:58 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
As the ones who give us birth, parents are the ones who care about us. Our childhoods are under mom and dad’s influence, that’s the reason why I think parents are the best teachers.

First of all, for the kids who do not realize much about the world, they always follow the action which their parents did. For example, my closest gay friend Mike, to tell the truth, he became a homesexual because his father likes men. So my friend Mike followed things that his father did.

On the other hand, as our family, dad and mom could teach us plenty of valuable things which we can never learn in school. For example, why we must be an honest child? Why it’s so important to be kind to others.

In a word, whether you agree or not, our parent do influence us a lot, like working, living, learning, even for the smallest things in the world. We will understand someday that parents are the best teachers for us. For them, we are always the best students and never-grown-up-kids .




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发表于 2012-9-24 17:36:31 | 只看该作者
太短了。。。内容不够充实。。。如果考场上写这么点内容(内容不纯粹等于字数),目测分数会比较尴尬。。。
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