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[作文互改] pp2 第二套 issue 这次备考第一次写,自己读起来觉得写得很简单,求拍!

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发表于 2012-8-11 20:47:26 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
题目是,社会应该让年轻人有更多合作感而不是竞争


The opinion held on this topic is societyshould  instill the young peoplewith  sense of cooperation but notcompetition in order to let them to be good leaders in the future. Although itreally make sense in some aspects, for cooperation is an important quality forleaders, it can be kind of loss for young people do not be taught to becompetitive.
 The suggestion made in the topic is kind of correct, since cooperationis very important in not only usual lives but business, goverment and otherfields. Cooperation is a skill between people to be kind and helpful to eachother, and it can inspire benefits from a whole which are more than eachindividual has. For example cooperation can focus lots of energies, money andmany other aspects of benefits, and in a word cooperation can make thingseasier to do. Especially in some emergencies, cooperation can help to savepeople's lives, such as catastrophes like earthquake.
 However, the benefits of cooperation do not make the idea in the topicsuch reasonable, and there are still some disadvantages if the society do so.On the one hand, it may not be realistic fot the society to instill only senseof cooperation but not competition to the young people. The diversity ofmessages and informations makes it difficult to prevented sense of competitionfrom those young people,  such astelevision, computer, and even daily life. We can not deny that life is full ofcompetitions, from children's social expriences to wars between countries. Howcan young people do not have sense of that? In their ages, their developmentsin emotion and intelligence are faster than any people, which means they aresensitive to what happened around them. So it is not realistic for society todo such an impossible work.
 Even if the society can do so, it may not have a good results. We havediscussed the importance of cooperation above, but how about the importance ofcompetition
? Can any one deny that? I suppose theanswer must be no. Competition  is also anecessary sense of leaders, for it can bring us the hope to improve ourselvesand excess others. For a leader, no matter in government , industry or otherfields, the responsibilities of him or her may not be only cooperate withothers, but more important, can compete with others and get good results, haveyour country or company get good benefits and big profits. If you can notcompete over others, you will lose your people, the land and  money, even lives ofpeople. Many good leaders in this society know how to led their group toimprove, for example, Steven Jobs, who was the leader of Apple, made the wholeworld crazy about their products. And so does Bill Gates, the leader ofMicrosoft.
  Inthis society, the abilities leaders should have are not only cooperations, butalso competition, and leaders should have good control of them too. You musthave a good balance of both senses, so that you can lead your government,industry or others to a bright future. And our society should have a balance ofboth to inspire our young people. And believe that, they will give us a bigsurprise!
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沙发
发表于 2012-8-12 11:37:31 | 只看该作者
如果你能谈谈什么时候需要合作什么时候需要竞争,你跟别人就不一样了
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-13 11:05:33 | 只看该作者
如果你能谈谈什么时候需要合作什么时候需要竞争,你跟别人就不一样了
-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/8/12 11:37:31)




完全没想到这个层面,看了作文5.5 跟书上建议的思路差不多了,还有什么书籍是可以补充思路的吗?谢谢版主!
地板
发表于 2012-8-13 18:57:36 | 只看该作者
这个到没有,只是自己学会怎么发散吧,其实这个方式很固定的
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-14 09:43:01 | 只看该作者
这个到没有,只是自己学会怎么发散吧,其实这个方式很固定的
-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/8/13 18:57:36)



好的,我多看看提纲总结吧。谢谢!!
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