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[issue] issue 2 ~ 时隔两个月。。再次开始aw。。啊 我要跪了。

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发表于 2012-4-22 18:33:59 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
ISSUE 2: To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.

When we talk about this issue, maybe it is necessary to clarify the meaning of a major city. In my view, a major city is a city where can represent some important characteristics of a society. Thus it is to some extent automatic that studying major cities is necessary since it can be beneficial for someone to understand the most important characteristics of a society. Admittedly, sometimes though a small city cannot represent an important characteristics, a group of small cities which have something in common may reflect an important characteristics. Therefore, in order to better understanding a society, one should be in a whole view by studying not only major cities but also observing if there are some small cities can also reveal some important characteristics of a society.

A society's important characteristics can be generalized from three fields: policy, economy and culture. One society's major cities always be a central political city, or where economy is thriving, or where teeming with cultural atmosphere. Thus when we discuss a major city maybe it is better to make a definition about which kind of major city it is: a political major city, a economic major city or a cultural major city.  

From a political perspective, China is a nation which policy system is the people's congress system. When we study one of China's major cities-- Beijing, which is also the political center, we can find that it does tell us some important information about China's political characteristics. One can see a great building in Beijing called Great Hall of the People, which used as a meeting place for people's representers and many important decisions such as the nation's political system are made there. However, it may be to some extent arbitrary to say that it can wholly reflect China's political system and only if we take some small cities which from political view like Hong Kong and Macao into consideration,we can have a better understanding of China's political situation that in fact China's political characteristics is Socialism with Chinese characteristics which political system is applied flexible according to districts' particular situation.

In economic field, San Francisco always be cited as a strong evidence that the Unite States is a powerful nation. By studying San Francisco, one can see that its strut is information and technology production. Thus to some degree we can conclude that the Unite States is a powerful nation which is based on the development of information and technology. However, when it comes to analyze China's economic situation, it seems hard to make a conclusion if only studying some major cities. For example, Hong Kong, which can be called a major city since its economy is very prospective, is a city carrying out capitalistic economy, however, it doesn't mean that China is a nation which economical system is capitalistic, in fact when we take some small cities such as Yiwu, Yongkang and so forth which is central in Province Zhejiang into consideration, where also have an economic prosperity, we can conclude that China is a nation which economic situation is complex and the economic policies are applied flexibly for better developing the economy.

From cultural view, studying major cities of course is beneficial for someone to find out the nation's mainstream culture. However, it cannot represent the society's wholly cultural characteristics, either. For example, Qufu, where is hometown of KongZi and the source of its han culture, can reflect China's mainstream culture. However, when we take a group of small cities which have common culture, we can discover that China is a multination and there are many different kinds of cultures.

In conclusion, to understand a society's most important characteristics, it is better to take the society as a whole and studying major cities along with observing small cities which have something in common.

ps:aw这东西真得实实在在写出来才能保持一定的水平,两个月没写,最后的冲刺不可避免地得再次经历寒假写aw的心酸。。这篇issue写的好纠结,磨蹭了好久还觉得写得好离谱!啊。。五月的战士桑不起~
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沙发
发表于 2012-4-23 10:04:09 | 只看该作者
One society's major cities always be a central political city, or where economy is thriving, or where teeming with cultural atmosphere. 有语法问题。

结尾太草草了事。段落逻辑性不强。多看看满分作文,多练。
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-4-23 15:12:20 | 只看该作者
THX~ 普渡大哥。。我隔了两个月没练,不过有一直在看提纲,基本熟悉题目了,我527考,现在这aw咋准备比较好呢,能不能给我个建议?
地板
发表于 2012-4-23 20:33:10 | 只看该作者
你的这篇前面写的很泛,不显得很有逻辑性。关于Issue,适当的发散是必要的,但要收的住,不要发散的远了,会显得单薄。这篇你的想法是好的,就是1.怎么定义major citise,然后就是society的主要特点了,你分领域写的,这样也行。
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-4-25 14:27:34 | 只看该作者
嗯。。我隔了一段时间 没写  但一直在看提纲 发现现在写issue是有一种我写中文的感觉(比较随意。。)
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发表于 2012-4-25 19:29:06 | 只看该作者
THX~ 普渡大哥。。我隔了两个月没练,不过有一直在看提纲,基本熟悉题目了,我527考,现在这aw咋准备比较好呢,能不能给我个建议?
-- by 会员 ykhjy (2012/4/23 15:12:20)

我也5.27 哦,共勉
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-4-27 19:51:14 | 只看该作者
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