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[作文互改] ISSUE 141(坚持信仰总是比妥协要好) 求您PIA PIA 我吧。。。谢谢

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发表于 2012-4-3 23:43:10 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式

Everybody may have his or her own belief. The beliefs may be divided to different aspects, such as the religion belief, civilization belief or idolatry. And adhering to your own belief will be good for your personal development in most of the time. However, if someone’s belief is nonsense or even harmful, it will surely do harm to his or her personal development.

First of all, we should see clearly about how important believes is in our lives. The belief can be compared to a beacon. We all know that when a ship is lost on the sea, not knowing where the bank is, it is the beacon’s light that helps the ship to find the right way to the destination. The same is true of the belief. It is the religion belief that gives a lot of people the purpose to life. It is the civilization belief that makes people love their own countries. And it is the idolatry that encourages people never to give up when facing the failures. Many people believe in the Christian, and by praying to the Jesus, people believe that Jesus is always along with them and bless them. And this will make people be more optimistic. When some people do badly in their jobs or studies, they just think of those people who never give up, like Jordan and Kobe Bryant, and this will call back their confidences and help them to fight again.

In the other words, if some people always change their thoughts, even their believes, it is bad. Try to think about that if someone can not adhere to his or her belief, what else can he or she pay attention to? Also, not adhering to one’s own belief will make him or her hesitative, and the person could hardly make any decision in the future. So it is important for one to adhere to his or her belief.

However, I admit that to adhere one’s belief is useful, but it has a premise. That is the belief must be correct and useful to one’s development. If the effect of the belief is just the opposite, the result will be the opposite, too. We all know Adolf Hitler, a famous politician and the head of Nazi. His belief is so strong that no one could change it, but his ambition is so huge that leads him to a wrong way. Try to think about that if Hitler changed his mind at that time, could the end be different? At least he would not be forced to suicide. So it is sure that being stick to an incorrect belief may destroy a whole person.

From all the reasons above, we should admit that it is the belief that plays an important role in one’s daily life, or even the whole life, and one should not change his or her belief easily. But when a person adheres to a wrong belief, after being guided, he or she should put the mind in the correct way.
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沙发
发表于 2012-4-4 00:01:55 | 只看该作者
偏题了。
板凳
发表于 2012-4-4 00:04:11 | 只看该作者
作者应该比较坚持和妥协的优劣,并不要你区分信仰的种类。你的文章触犯了美国人信仰自由的神经,分数可能会特别低。
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2012-4-4 00:13:17 | 只看该作者
啊!那我得注意了。。。重新写一篇
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发表于 2012-4-28 18:33:44 | 只看该作者
请问如果作文里写到最早到美国的英国人和美国印第安人之间的战争的例子会不会也低分……?
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