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[issue] 新g issue 3 二次修改 求拍~

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发表于 2012-1-18 12:39:40 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
3) Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

The statement claims that educational institutions are responsible for students' success, and they should dissuade students from pursuing fields of study where they are unlikely to succeed. At first, one problem should be solved that what means success? The statement seems to assume that success is explained by the contribution levels that one makes. Since talented persons who can make contribution to the society can be fostered through education, educational institutions actually have responsibility for students' success. On one hand, education can affect students' value of life, which have something to do with one's success; on the other hand, students can learn numerous skills from education, which directly affect students' success.
 
Through dissuading students from pursuing fields of study where they are unlikely to succeed, more students can be leaded to a success way, and thus they can make more contribution to the society. For instance, a student, who is not good at math, educational institutions should dissuade him pursuit the fields which have high requirement for math such as financial fields.

However, of course, it is a success to make contribution to the society, to realize one's own value of life can be another success. And educational institutions should define their own assignment which is to explore how to aid and manage teaching, rather than interfering students' choice. There is a relationship between students' pursuit of study's fields in which they may fail in and their thought about their own value of life: some believe their value of life is pursuing knowledge and be desire to satisfy their curiosities; some consider to challenge various unknown fields, devoting themselves for science... Since students have the right to choose education, educational institutions should respect students' own interest and mind, offering equal educational resources.

In addition, students don't necessarily fail in those fields of study where they are unlikely to succeed. Take Hu Ba yi who is a famous mathematician as an example. Since many times he got zero in  math exams when he was a little boy, it seems that he was unlikely to succeed in math field of study, and if educational institutions dissuade him from pursuing of this field, he may not become  such a celebrated mathematician.
[将三四段位置调了下,突出我对成功的看法。]  

In conclusion, rather than dissuading students not to pursuit fields of study where are unlikely to succeed, educational institutions are responsible to instruct students to discern their own goal, and try their best to offer sufficient educational resources to aid students to realize their value of life.
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沙发
发表于 2012-1-18 21:46:53 | 只看该作者
还有一点,学校认为的成功并不一定是个人的成功,每个人生命的意义都不一样,比如并不是每个人都要上大学才能实现理想。
板凳
发表于 2012-1-18 22:43:23 | 只看该作者
1. you can replace ‘value of life' with 'call in life' or 'place in life'
2. At first, one problem should be solved that what means success? ---VS--- Firstly, one problem should be solved and that is what is the definition of success?
3. The statement seems to assume that success is explained by the contribution levels that one makes.     Think about this, maybe the statement is assuming that success is determined by how much the individual gets out of it!

great work
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2012-1-19 10:01:03 | 只看该作者
THX~
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