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独立写作的时间感觉不够用啊。。。这还不到400字就已经超了不少时间。。感觉就是不知道怎么将一个观点发展成一个段落，不知道是该用例子还是讲道理。。悲剧。。
综合写作：关于利他行为有没有回报，例子是meerkat这玩意。。文章中说的观点是利他行为都是没回报的，和听力中说有。
In the lectures the professor mainly rebuts three areas of the passage.
First of all, the professor objects to the point made in the passage that the sentinel looks out for the predators without having any food by introducing new discovery of meerkat’s eating habit. In a group of meerkat the sentinel usually has its meal before the guard, which means that actually a meerkat has more chance to feed itself if it guards for others.
Besides, in the passage it says that a guarding meerkat is in greater danger than other meerkats when a predator attack, since it has to flee alone without other members’ protection. The professor again refutes this by showing that actually the guarding meerkat has a better chance to survive the attack because as the first one that see the predator it can run away immediately and in addition, the predator are just less likely to hunt for the one who issues the alarm.
At last the professor disagrees with the assertion that in our society a donor of organs awards nothing. In her point of view. The donor receives other people’s appreciation and has a feeling of increased self-worth, which also can be defined as great rewards by some people.
独立写作：年轻人是该自己住还是该和家人住？
Nowadays you can find more and more students live independently away from their parents. Although some people may argue that living with parents helps students grow more smoothly, for students get protects from their parents, as far as I am concerned it is better for students to live alone in that it helps them succeed in the future.
First of all, living alone makes them survive daily life. Students who live alone tend to be more independent, because they have to take care of themselves. For example, they cook, rent houses, and washing clothes for themselves, so latter in their life if they go aboard for study they can safe a great deal of money on food for they can buy cheap raw materials and make food for themselves or they can spend less money renting a house outside the school instead of living on campus. Of course saving more money helps them to survive in a foreign country easier.
Besides, living alone helps students with their studies. If no one ever supervises you, you yourself will take that position, resulting in a self-disciplined character which is crucial in studying. What’s more, since there isn’t any one who accompanies, the students may prefer to go to library or studying room more often than otherwise. This is also helpful for their studies because they can meet more diligent students there and they can be affected positively by the diligent ones. It’s true that it is the environment that shapes a person.
The last but not the least, student can make more friends if they live by themselves. Since they have more chances to invite their friends to the place where they live, they can establish a good relationship with their friends easier. In addition, most students will find those who live by themselves cool, and have tendency to contact with these people, which results in more chances of communication. So students who live alone usually have a good network.
Since all the positive outcomes of living alone mentioned above can contribute to future success, I draw to the conclusion that living alone helps students better.
Nowadays you can find more and more students live independently away from their parents. Although some people may argue that living with parents helps students grow more smoothly, for students get protects from their parents, as far as I am concerned it is better for students to live alone in that it helps them succeed in the future.
First of all, living alone makes them survive daily life. Students who live alone tend to be more independent, because they have to take care of themselves. For example, they cook, rent houses, and washing clothes for themselves, so latter in their life if they go aboard for study they can safe a great deal of money on food for they can buy cheap raw materials and make food for themselves or they can spend less money renting a house outside the school instead of living on campus. Of course saving more money helps them to survive in a foreign country easier.
Besides, living alone helps students with their studies. If no one ever supervises you, you yourself will take that position, resulting in a self-disciplined character which is crucial in studying. What’s more, since there isn’t any one who accompanies, the students may prefer to go to library or studying room more often than otherwise. This is also helpful for their studies because they can meet more diligent students there and they can be affected positively by the diligent ones. It’s true that it is the environment that shapes a person.
The last but not the least, student can make more friends if they live by themselves. Since they have more chances to invite their friends to the place where they live, they can establish a good relationship with their friends easier. In addition, most students will find those who live by themselves cool, and have tendency to contact with these people, which results in more chances of communication. So students who live alone usually have a good network.
Since all the positive outcomes of living alone mentioned above can contribute to future success, I draw to the conclusion that living alone helps students better. |
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