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发表于 2010-8-15 13:59:36 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
22、一个好的同事的标准是:
In response to the problem, some people may argue that a fantastic co-worker should have his/her own core value, which is responsibility, personal integrity of profession, kindheartedness and open-minded. But is it? Close analysis does not bear out the argument.

In response to the problem, some people may argue that as a co-worker, the most important characteristics are utility value, because this characteristic is substantially practical point.
First of all, it is always top of the list of my viewpoints that a fantastic co-worker has responsibility, which is the substance of all things. To make my demonstration more profoundly and comprehensively, I would like t o cite what one of my favorable celebrities has mentioned," my fellow Americans, ask not what your country can do for you; ask what you can do for your country”, this great well-known saying was announced by John Fitzgerald Kennedy who is the 35th president of the united states.
Moreover, also provides adequate justification for my opinion. According to 100 studies carried out in 10 major cities throughout China, people suppose to agree with that the most engaging characteristics are “personal integrity of profession” and no one can deny the truth behind the number.


In addition, an equally essential factor which deserves people's attention is kindheartedness, which represents a guy who like to help his/her colleague, and enlighten their puzzles. A kindhearted co-worker who should be respected other colleague.


All in all, although some people may still remain unconvinced, the reasons I have analyzed could at least make them more aware of the various dimensions of the issue under discussion. There is little doubt that more and more people will come to realize that we should always think about these questions that “what can I do for my colleague? ” and “what characteristics I should possess?”
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2010-8-16 13:09:44 | 只看该作者
七夕快乐 帮忙看看吧
板凳
发表于 2010-8-18 16:30:15 | 只看该作者
不好意思,在公司,所以只是随便扫了一眼。。。看到一个很突兀的guy。。。我觉得有点太口语化了。。。

别的没法仔细看,不好意思,怕被领导骂,呵呵呵。。
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2010-8-19 15:15:39 | 只看该作者
谢谢大侠!
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发表于 2010-8-19 20:01:45 | 只看该作者
..........
就这就以身相许了..
6#
发表于 2010-8-22 10:57:25 | 只看该作者
废话太多了,考官最讨厌这种文章
像First of all, it is always top of the list of my viewpoints that 。。。, which is the substance of all things我靠好恶心啊,直接一个firstly不就完了么
你有point的内容很少很少
7#
发表于 2010-8-23 20:55:42 | 只看该作者
楼上说得很好,真的
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发表于 2010-8-28 21:56:55 | 只看该作者
建议看一下老托185 的修改后的作文,很不错!
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发表于 2010-8-30 17:10:00 | 只看该作者
文章精简些,你qq多少,考友交流一下
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