快考了，问几个低级问题=。=

nomoney555 · 发表于 2010-2-5 12:26:36

作文被我忽视了，没怎么好好复习=。=快考试了，悲剧了

第一个问题~在argument中，我在第一段陈述作者思路的时候，能不能直接摘用里面的原句呢？当然不是一句话从头到尾，但是可不可以摘用主干的大部分，直接抄的那种？

第二个问题~我AA刚好稳定在300字左右，上下不超过5个字，然后时间用完，AI怎样都要超时间，估计写到时间也就是300多一点，是不是很不行啊？要怎样改进啊？

第三个问题~求鉴定，我就只背这个模板应付所有的AA有没有问题呢？

开头In this argument, the author concludes that…

At first glance, the argument is plausible. However, it omits some important concerns that need to be addressed to substantiate the argument. 结束

结尾(直接抄CD的了）To sum up, this argument is not persuasive as it stands.

To render the argument logically acceptable, the author would have to demonstrate that...

In addition, only with more concrete and more convincing evidence could this argument become more than just an emotional appeal.拜谢！

To sum up, this argument is not persuasive as it stands.

To render the argument logically acceptable, the author would have to demonstrate that...

In addition, only with more concrete and more convincing evidence could this argument become more than just an emotional appeal.拜谢！

我心向明月 · 发表于 2010-2-6 12:58:04

第一，建议你看几篇范文，你就不会想着抄原句了。
第二，在没有什么错误的情况下，建议尽量写多一些，我练习的时候，通常会写到400左右；
第三，这模板有点过于简单了。

nomoney555 · 发表于 2010-2-6 20:32:45

谢谢LS的指导~~

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