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Essay的字数分配问题

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楼主
发表于 2009-10-15 20:31:00 | 只看该作者

Essay的字数分配问题

Tuck的第一个问题是Why MBA for short term,long term career goal, Why Tuck?
一共三个问题,我第一个问题就花了380个字,后面两个(long term&why tuck)只有100来字,因为我觉得后面两个问题也确实比较难写,倒是第一个问题可以说出很多。
这样是不是有点头重脚轻?
沙发
发表于 2009-10-20 03:26:00 | 只看该作者
Yes...very much.

You need to find a balance, and it is way more important to emphasize your long term goals. It shows that you are not myopic in terms of your life. It is also extremely important to also show why you picked Tuck. If you do not do this, then it shows that you have no real vision because you have no idea WHY  you picked your graduate school. For this, you need to emphasize the school's program, extra-curricular, research, etc. Do not talk about their reputation. I have worked MIT's admissions office for years now and I am a graduate student at Harvard University. I offer writing and editing services. You can send me an email at tinaxue@mit.edu or tinaxue@fas.harvard.edu. If you want, you can send me your essay and I can give you some immediate feedback on how to improve it for free.
板凳
发表于 2009-10-20 18:50:00 | 只看该作者
God..Maori, you do this for everyone?
地板
发表于 2009-10-20 23:44:00 | 只看该作者
In fact, she does this as her part-time job.
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发表于 2009-10-21 09:26:00 | 只看该作者

我也在书里看到:Generally your short term goal is not your most shiny part.

供楼主参考

6#
 楼主| 发表于 2009-10-21 11:49:00 | 只看该作者
OK. I have read part of <65 successful HBS essays>, and what all your guys said are correct.
However I want to accomplish my application by myself, thanks any way!
BTW: I do admire people on part-time job and I did that too.
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