[求助]8月22号考试了，我这篇作文改了好几次，各位牛人帮忙看看还有哪里不足的，能不能提提意见

Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students. Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students. Discuss this these vies. Which views do you agree with?

It is obvious that every one should have the right to gain the higher education. However, I do not think so. The reasons why are students can create a good studying atmosphere and gain more knowledge as well as those bad students play a role as a troublemaker.

First of all, a class that consists of good students has a good atmosphere. Obviously, we know the reason is during the study time, all of those good students will not absent-minded or feel tired of studying. They will continue studying hard till the end of the study time. So, if there are some bad students in the class, of course they have been tired of studying, they will try to make a conversation between those good students during the study time. After some communication has turned up, the whole study atmosphere will be broken. This will lead to the result of the effect of the study of those good students.

Secondly, those good students can gain more knowledge. Thus all the students in class are good students, they must own strong study ability. For the simple knowledge, they can learn much faster than common students. That means they can save a lot of time on learning some extra knowledge that is related to their future career. Also, the teacher of those students can teach more. Because they are good students, teachers can talk about the book briefly, in the rest of time, they can teach some further knowledge.

Moreover, some one still insists on the opinion that every student has the right to get higher education. This opinion seems right, but for those bad students, they are equal to a troublemaker. After entering the university, bad students still wish not to study. In order to make funs, they will affect those good students on inviting them to play games or see a movie. After some time, those good students are not able to get on with their study. That means bad students destroy the future of good students. Hence, compare with the right of those bad students to the future of those good students, the so-called right of those bad students is less important.

In conclusion, the higher education should be just available to those good students because they can make good use of this chance on gaining more knowledge and creating good atmosphere to learn better. In contrast, bad students just waste a chance for other good students to learn better.