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我的一片作文,请大虾们指点,大概能拿多少分呢?

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楼主
发表于 2008-12-10 02:54:00 | 只看该作者

我的一片作文,请大虾们指点,大概能拿多少分呢?

大学应不应该要求所有的学生都学习除了本国文化以外的文化?

 

As an university student, do you feel shame when someone talks about the culture of other country but you can respond nothing? Does that blow your confidence when your employers ask questions about other culture but you can’t answer? Do you doubt that you can handle your job completely, when you work in a joint venture company? I believe, every university students are aware of their knowledge about other culture after I asked all these questions above. As a vital factor, the knowledge of other culture is the key to build your confidence, to open the door of opportunities and to be an evitable tool for your work.

 

If you can communicate with your friend naturally about other culture, you could generate the confidence. Which means your friend won’t look upon you, and it can enhance the good relationship of you. We all know that having the same topic is very important for friends. Moreover, you can get more respect from your audience if you can give some information that they don’t know. Thus, your confidence will be stronger.

 

You may get the offer of a new job when you can fluently answer the questions of other culture when you face the employers in job interview. You can be looked as a board range of knowledge people who is necessary for some big companies. Working in Microsoft or GE is everybody’s dream, isn’t it?

 

In the global village, the knowledge of other culture is an ability to cooperate with other foreigner clients. If you know some native polite way to communicate, it must be helpful to your transactions. Since your clients feel you extremely respect to their culture. In this fierce competition market, it’s an advantage to your competitor.

 

After read all of these reasons I’ve stated above. You must know the knowledge of other culture is necessary to make your dream come true. If you haven’t, don’t be frustrated. You just need to broaden your knowledge right now. I believe it’s not too late.

沙发
发表于 2009-1-12 23:41:00 | 只看该作者
那个大概看了一下,很多错误的。。。虽然刚开始看tofel,但是这样不行哦,要注意尽量不要有语法错误的 。。
板凳
发表于 2009-1-29 04:40:00 | 只看该作者

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=68&id=369832 

我就你的作文发表了一下个人看法,希望不要介意。:)

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