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题目是讨论 给他人建议的最好方式 是不是发现他人的愿望并且给出如何实现这些愿望的观点

Is the best way to give advice to other people to find out what they want and then advise them how to attain it as the speaker claims? Admittedly, giving advices related to things which people want makes advices easy to be accepted, but many people actually do not know what they want. Moreover, sometimes things which people want are not necessary or good for them.

First, mass of people do not know exactly what they want. For example, the most popular answer you will get from asking  teenagers what they want is they want success. However, what is success? There are many definitions of success, including earning much money, being famous and so on. These teenagers can not distinguish differences from those defininations of success thus they don't have a clear idea  what success they really chase. In modern society, the progress of industry gives us more so many opportunities that it is difficult to determine how and what to choose. Under this condition, how can us find out what other people want and give them advices?

Further more, in many cases, people pursue things that are not necessary or are harmful for them. Let's take my brother for instance. My brother is an 17 years old high school student. But he's crazy in playing net games and often fails in exam. Can I give him advices such as " go on playing games to become a professional players, forget stuff of learning" ? Obviously I can't, because it will lead him to deeper corruption.  The right advice for him is to ask him to concentrate on studying but not playing games which he originally wants.

In conclusion, it is true that making suggestion in the way that the speaker advocates has some merits, yet it does not make sense because people do not know what they want and because they sometimes want improper things. So that's why I do not agree with the speaker.

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如果考试就只有这个水平，大概能的多少？

个人认为字数有点偏少。因为听说电脑是按照错误次数和总体字数的比例来判分。好像有这个标准，也就是说，写的字越少要求错误越少。