ChaseDream
搜索
返回列表 发新帖
查看: 2475|回复: 8
打印 上一主题 下一主题

马上要考了·大家看看这能得多少分

[复制链接]
楼主
发表于 2008-3-12 21:23:00 | 只看该作者

马上要考了·大家看看这能得多少分

题目4

Which source is more important the knowledge form books or the knowledge from experience

When it comes to the question which source is more important, the knowledge gained from books or the knowledge learned from experience? People differ their attitude towards this question. Some maintain that knowledge gained from experience is to human what the foundation is to a skyscraper. Others hold the idea that with the bloom of the printing technology, knowledge acquired from books becomes cheaper, so it is playing a more important role in modern society. Both these two ideas have their own reasons.

 

In general, no one can deny the fact that knowledge acquired from books is second-hand experience from other people. Knowledge in books would never be so marvelous or abundant as it is today without the existence of knowledge gained from experience. How can you imagine a man try to learn to swim without the experience of jumping in to water or a scientist declares a hypothesis without experiments? Moreover the knowledge acquired from experience is much more comprehensive and impressive than that from books.

 

On the other hand, it can be argued that knowledge gained from books has a wider range than that gained from experience. An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that a man can not put every thing into practice. So the knowledge acquired from experience seems too limited. On the contrary, we can learn everything in library only if we have already acquired basic reading skills, philosophy, history, literature, physics, mathematics, and the list will go on.

 

As to which source is more important, it really depends. We can see that man can not develop without either knowledge gained from experience or knowledge from books. For the simple reason that the former is more essential, but the latter has no limitations. In a word, it is rather superficial to draw the conclusion that which one is more important.

沙发
发表于 2008-3-13 22:53:00 | 只看该作者

看在您字数份上给您2分    严重离题    将观点对比型题写成支持反对型 因为您套用模板 痕迹较严重 我看不出您想表达什么观点 因为您根本没有中心论点句

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2008-3-14 07:34:00 | 只看该作者
您能把您的观点说得具体详细点吗?作文题问那种知识更重要,我分别说明了两种知识的优点重要性,得出了对人们都很重要,单纯的比较是肤浅的
地板
发表于 2008-3-14 08:12:00 | 只看该作者

请您仔细读下题

Which source is more important the knowledge form books or the knowledge from experience?

题是问你哪个source更加重要?所以您选择其中一个source 并

解释原因  另一个source只能作为辅助论述

5#
 楼主| 发表于 2008-3-14 17:09:00 | 只看该作者

不知大哥以前看过托福作文没

难道您没见过折衷论证吗?请问你看过李笑来的书没·····

6#
发表于 2008-3-14 17:51:00 | 只看该作者
不好意思 以上只是个人意见 没说我一定对啊
7#
 楼主| 发表于 2008-4-11 17:34:00 | 只看该作者
8#
发表于 2008-5-3 21:12:00 | 只看该作者

这么写好像不对吧,推荐:陈述背景,个人观点。

                  理由1

                  理由2

                  理由3

                  结论(带相反观点对比)

请大家点评!

9#
发表于 2008-5-3 23:11:00 | 只看该作者
lzdd,很忠恳的建议,如果你想要辩证分析.就是俩方面都说说,比较各自优缺点,不是不好,而是这需要很清晰的思路和很熟悉的套路(自己形成的个人套路),不知你考过GMAT没,这样的思维训练是GMAT的考试要求.托福考试是考你的语言表达能力,没必要在文章形式上做文章,如果你能更进一步语言的训练可是锦上添花呢,文章格式也请遵循最老套但是很安全而又完美的格式,总分总.提出观点,3个分观点支持你的总观点,三个细节支持三个分观点,最后总结.不用disagree和agree都来说...取其一就好.如果能在此结构上语言到位,自然分数不会低呢....记住..托福不是考你思维的!
您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 立即注册

Mark一下! 看一下! 顶楼主! 感谢分享! 快速回复:

所属分类: TOEFL / IELTS

正在浏览此版块的会员 ()

手机版|ChaseDream|GMT+8, 2025-8-7 08:28
京公网安备11010202008513号 京ICP证101109号 京ICP备12012021号

ChaseDream 论坛

© 2003-2025 ChaseDream.com. All Rights Reserved.

返回顶部